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by Jelp

schedule October 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
thanks for the update of tis story. now that restless and nameless are over i was just waiting for you to start putting up chapters of this story and i was not disappointed. even though sakura is not one of my favorite characters i had to give it to her for paralyzing sasuke, that was a nice move. the battle for naruto is on baby. and even though i now that sasuke will ultimately win i can't wait to see the crazy things you have planned ahead. can't wait to see the next chapter.
person Damp
schedule October 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story!

At first, I didn't think I liked it, not cuase of the fact that Naruto was married to Sakura, but because he was married. I thought for sure Naruto was cheating on her, but to my relief, he wasn't consciouse (That doesn't nessisarily make it a good thing.) of the whole thing. I feel uncomfortable with the whole idea of a marriage and one of the married couple is cheating. I hate those kinds of plot lines. Thank goodness this isn't one!

-Damp *Nice job!!*
person purplelev
schedule October 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hi. I'm so glad you decided to post the second chapter to Mine. I really like this story, it's kinda of dark but really good. I can't wait for the next chapter.
Thanks
person Jien
schedule October 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
update soon!!
person Tedabug (not logged in)
schedule October 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yea, Sakura, that's the way to protect her man! This chapter and overall story is outrageously brilliant. Poor Naruto! I both pity/hate Sasuke for what he's doing and feel for Sakura. This story is so original!
person qwerty
schedule October 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
When is Naruto going to find out and who is going to stay with?
update!!
person mango
schedule September 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i love the idea of saku/naru vs sasunaru XD i really would like to see where you're going with this :D maybe a little sasunarusaku? o_o?
schedule August 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Jelp-Sama, thanks for the review! (It's MissMayumi on me and C-2006's joint account) I'm glad you like it! Currently we're working on chapter 2! So keep you're eye out!! ^^
person Anon
schedule August 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
would be a very interesting story
schedule August 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow, so after I read Nameless Desire I still wanted to read more of such awesome fics, though I strayed away from this one for quite some time. Now i wonder why. Very...umm, interesting. And SAsuke...hmmm I can imagine it, and like Sakura admitted herself, its something quite nice to think about lol Though I wish she would tell him becuz you know Naruto would run over to Sasuke or somethin... lol. But then agian, in Sakura's place I might too want to keep his heart forever. :/ ooooh i'm selfish, I want Naruto all to myself (sometimes with a side of Sasuke LOL)

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