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by Jelp

person mls
schedule January 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I Can't Wait To Read The Next Chapter!!!!!!!!!
schedule January 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Chapter six was just great. Blaming poor Konohamaru for a diry prank! Continue soon please.
schedule January 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*Cries* I just want Naruto to find out. That's all. Just find out. Yes, I would also appreciate it if he said "Thank you, Sasuke! You are my best friend and I know you were only doing it because you love me! I know, I'll totally ditch Sakura and you can spend the rest of the afternoon 'balancing' me out! What do you say, buddy?"
Okay, admittedly, that wouldn't be Naruto at all, but still. You have to see where I'm going with this. Right? Right?
*Sigh* And people get on me about cliff hangers...
Awesome update... waiting patiently for the next... patiently, I say, patiently...
person kyuubikit
schedule January 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Please please please post more asap... i'm dying for more I need to know how it ends...
person Anon
schedule January 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow this is a powerful story. Had me crying at Sasu's lonliness. I can't wait to see how Naru takes it. hearing about it I mean. Can you add me to the updates?
person Bri
schedule January 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Dragging it out, hunh? The suspense is too much! Can't wait to see how Naruto reacts to the news...I hope he chooses Sasuke even though Sakura is semilikable in your story, but Sasuke/Naruto tops Sakura/Naruto any day :)
person Sayuri
schedule December 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I've watched this fic since it first began, and it's really intriguing me now. It's so emotional on the part of Sasuke. I really hope you update soon because I want to see what happens when the truth is revealed. How will everyone act? Will Sasuke and Naruto ever have their 'happily ever after'? Will Sakura understand? Will there be a permanent cure for Naruto's Yang imbalance? So many questions!!! Please please update, I want to read more~
person JJ
schedule December 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey Jelp been a while so i see you havent lost ur touch so how is identidy crises comeing let me know when its out and let me know when there is a next chapter for mine and any other stories you are writeing k
person mango
schedule December 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This has turned into something really good :O


I believe you're writing this on a whim (sasuke's in my head ._.) but please update more~! and frequently~! I'm looking forward to it! :D
person areader
schedule December 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hey jelp. ive read the one-shot to this (now ch 1) and thought it was pretty darn good, definitetly had me itchin' for more. so im glad to come back and see that its now a multichapter fic. i'm curious to how the story resolves itself. however, i do have a bit of a concern (for a lack of a better word), the sperm-to-save-life deal seems a bit farfetched even in a fanfiction. but most of all, tsunade's "idea" to get sasuke to bed naruto dulled down the intensity of story. it would been far more raw and passionate had it been from sasuke all the way bc he would have been working his pure emotions, lust, love, whathaveyou to naruto and not from duty (although the feeling sprang from it). so it basically waters down the initial plot as set up in ch 1. I suppose it was meant as a twist, but it wasnt necessary and convolutes the story. eh, but that's my teo cents. feel free to disagree. :-) nothing personal of course.

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