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I really liked this chapter. I hope Naruto won't keeping hurting Sasuke just because he's upset. I know Sasuke lied but I feel he's the most sympathetic character in this fic. Anyways look foward to an update =)

Wow, I really liked the last chapter. It was kinda sad in Sasuke's point of view and I feel terrible for him, and Naruto's being a bit of a jerk but I guess I can see where he's coming from. But he's in complete denial of Sasuke's feelings, especially since he's been told by Tsunade of all the circumstances and the list of stuff. I wonder if Sasuke's gonna do anything since it looks like he's going into depression a little due to everything that's happened. I can't wait for more because I want to see where this goes, and I want to see the presumably happy ending for Sasuke and Naruto. ^^

Poor Sasuke!!! Naruto knows his feelings and he knows why Sasuke did what he did, it's sad that he's taking out his anger on Sasuke. At least Sasuke wants to save Naruto despite his heartache. Thanks for the new chapter! It made me very emotional!

;_;, That was so fucking sad!!! Poor Sasuke! Poor Naruto!! Aggghhh!! LOL, I have to laugh, otherwise, it's just too sad. Sasuke's gonna freak out and do something stupid isn't he?? Gods *wrings hands* you're making me way too emotional for comfort!! I really thought I'd feel bad for Sakura, but I don't. I just feel bad for the boys. Tsunade's such a smart cookie XD. I can't wait to see what's gonna happen next. I love that Naruto in the middle of feeling bad was enjoying the control he had over Sasuke's emotions. I mean I know it's somewhat terrible to play with people's feelings but I know that it makes you feel awesomely powerful *sighs*. It's just such a base human reaction. *hugs u* Thanks so much for the quick update. I hope it happens again XD. I'm totally addicted to this story ♥

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My heart! x.o It hurts...it hurts bad. Naruto, buddy, I know you're outraged and you have every reason to be...but, for Sasuke's sake, at least let him lick your shoulder or something next time! I mean, come on! He's not going to be able to even AIM properly at the rate his vision's leaving him! Help HIM help you!

Absolutely DELICIOUS!!! I have kept up with this story since the time I discovered it (forgive me for never reviewin' until now) and I must deeply congratulate you on making me, a realistic non-Naruto fan actually get more into the series/manga just through the characters in your fanfic. While I did know enough and have heard of the Naruto manga/anime, I only recently took the liberties to look into on my own after reading this story. Anywayz, enough about me--I am so in luv with this story! The characterizations and the flow of it are friggin' sweet!:) My heart literally clinched when Naruto 'dismissed' Sasuke as he did in the latest chapter--god, the tension and emotion of your writing is unbelievably delicious. As a fellow writer, I love your diction and sense of atmosphere, something some writers can either rush or needlessly prolong. Ohmigod, please update soon!!!

P.S. I hope some tasty Naru/Sasu sexual tension will be brewing (if only on Naruto's side) since he's now admitted his true feelings for the poor unloved-feeling Uchiha:( Poor Sasuke!!

I think this chapter was great! Thanx for the regular updates Jelp! I wish naruto would chose sasuke in the end! poor sasuke, he seemed so sad towards the end. I loved how naruto had to bite his lip not to moan... I hope sasuke will find the guts to tell him how much he loves him so that they all forget about sakura once and for all! Can't wait to see what happens next!

your fic is the best.

I hope Naruto will be more involved in the love making with Sasuke. He was so broken when left, that my heart went out to him, but I understands Narutos' anger. Anyway, great story looking forward to the rest.

*runs around* Another chapter! Oh dear if this is the results of you taking liberties please by all means take them, take them. Saying it was a great chapter just isn't enough really. Loved seeing how Naruto was feeling about everything. Poor Sasuke . . . if he wasn't a made up character I'd just give him a hug . . . plus if I could hug him he'd probably stab me with a kunai being I'm not Naruto *lol*. The poor guy talk about performance anxiety and the only thing keeping him from taking a kunai to himself is Naruto needs him alive to save his life . . . so deep. AAAh! What's going to happen next? How will Naruto be able to pick between Sasuke and Sakura? Will he pick between them or will the choice be taken from him? Will they be able to clear Sakura's name or will she never be able to return to Konoha? Who is the one causing the problems for Tsunade and Naruto and what other problems will this person be causing? When will Naruto be honest with himself about how he feels? How about Sasuke when will he finally tell his real feelings? Will Naruto be honest with Sasuke about his own chakra problems and how he can help? Lol, it won't be long before he tells him will it being he almost did this first time. Please . . .have mercy . . . type like the wind! Yes, I'm begging for more. Can't wait but, I will . . . patiently . . . really. I'll be good . . . yep, no problems. I can wait . . . . Hey *looks around shifty like* . . . how long do you think it will take you? No pressure, just wondering. Oh hell. *Grabs computer and puts face very close* Come on I need it! LOL!!!

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