rate_review Reviews

I like where the story seems to be going =) Grammer, spelling, and punctuation look good (so no complaints there); however, it would probably make the story easier to read if you did not break the sentences up so much, other than that you are O.K ^.^

I adore GaaNaru/NaruGaa, so I have an invested interest now 0.o; this means you'll most likely hear from me again! XD

'Til next time!