rate_review Reviews

Omg why do I keep insulting people like that...I keep on everytime calling other authors girly when I SHOULD ASK IF THEY'RE A GUY! AH! I'm a baka sometimes...seriously! ANYWAY! Chapter two was just as awesome as the first one! There was a few errors and it was a little confusing but by and by it was great! I just think you need a little tweaking, to help you along to make it flow smoother. I should know I confuse the hell out of people at MOST times with my stories...LOL. If you change it up a bit, give more information on what this story is I think it'll be a hit! I love it so far! I hope you won't get pissy with me or nothing..Just wanted to help out like oraday did for me you know? She gave me some helpful advise ^^ Well..ttul! Love it!

wow great story...can't wait for more :D

It looks pretty interesting girly! I await your next chappie! Keep up the great work!