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April 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is great
More please
More please
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December 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*wades hip deep in spelling and grammar errors in this story* man, this is bad.... but the story and the premise is amazing. keep it up, but try to add punctuation and try to spell a bit better, 3/5
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January 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
The random fangirl Japanese is extremely distracting. Suffixes like -san and -sensei are one thing just mixing languages when it isn't necessary is, as said, distracting. I suspend my belief to stretch that this little tale might be able to happen but if it isn't written in a realistic way, then it just comes across as if you're trying too hard.
Stick to one language.
Stick to one language.
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May 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
A very good fic. Hope you continue soon.
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May 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very cute.. I like this pairing and its so hard to find good yuri fics... or at least for me... but I really liked this. So please continue. ^^
-Akiru-
-Akiru-
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April 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
awwwww
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April 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very hot. Hope you update soon!