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for Sunlight in a Dark Room

by sunshinemelodi

person Mey
schedule July 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ny, oh my! It has been so long since the last update that I even thaught you had dropped it (I'm SO glad you didn't, though ^^)
Excelent chap! It was very plotty (I love that ^^) and Itachi keeps on getting cuter and cuter xD
Ash, i wonder what will come out of it... it's getting more interesting by the second xD
schedule July 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow, its been awhile!! You had us abandoned! I'm so glad you came back and updated. A very nice treat, along with that Princess Diana b-day celebration thingy on tv. Did i ever mention how the "Foolish little brother" line slays me every time i read it lol. Not that Itachi is far off in his musings. He is right. It's also quite important seeing that Itachi is recognizing the changes in him. I can't wait too see where this goes particualrly since Itachi has no plans in stopping the seal-breaking. Chap wasn't bad at all. 'sides, if it doesn't please you, the miracle of Editing is available. ^_^ Update soon!!!!
schedule July 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love this story and am an avid reader. Hope to see more soon!!! Great job and another amazing chapter. I love how Itachi is developing and I'm a total Ita/Naru fangirl. Hope to see some Ita/Naru loving soon!
person Anon
schedule July 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I'M LUVIN THIS!!!!!!!!!!!! *SPINSPINSPIN* SO CUTE, AWESOME, LUFFLY, ETCTERYYYYYYYYYYYYYY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person Imperial Mint
schedule June 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This story is absolutely amazing! I love the progress of Itachi and Naruto's relationship. I'm looking forward to the next chapter!
person Bone-Iky
schedule June 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Thank you!! This was very good I love it, please update soon

My English is very bad >,<
And I read this story with "Translator" XDD
person Justdancing
schedule June 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
.... *Is waiting impatiently for the next chapter* @_@u haha I like it so far! And that's saying something because I'm not a fan of Itachi/Naruto! So... good work! yay! Cough-writefaster-cough hehe ^_^ I joke. you take your time and do a good job. :)
schedule June 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I didn't review this yet did I?
I came across this fiction a few day back, and I gotta say it's wonderful.
ItaNaru is such a rare pairing, it's almost impossible to find a good fiction on it.
this is really so awsomely good I hope to read more soon. ^.^
person ProstoChudo
schedule June 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
it's my favourite fic. I think that main line is perfect. Your language is cool. It's difficult to say exactly becouse i'm from russian and my english is not perfect. I think that psicology of main herous is IC and very interesting. it's very interesting, how step by step you show incresing connection beyween Itachi and Naruto.
I like Ita/Maru and i can say that your fic reached hight quality.
So, in one word: godgeos! I'm waiting next chapter!!! =)
person Princezz
schedule June 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow, this is the first REALLY good plot line for this pairing i've seen so far. I am anxiously awaiting another great scene between the two of them!

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