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February 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
this would be fun if it wasn't for all the typos... and whatever they've done to the formatting is truly painful. I don't think that's your fault though. I've seen a couple of stories go all 'block of text'. it makes it damn hard to read.
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September 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
you've got a really good well thought out story and plot here, i likw it the only thing that gets to me is the occasional bad grammer. what can i say i'm a stickler for the good stuff. but a very cool story i look forward to seeing what happends next
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January 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
for your next story why don't you do a shikanaru or shinonaru. there aren't that many of those out
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November 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. PLEASE UPDATE SOON.
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June 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
alright i say make a naruto/shikamaru/kabuto/gaara/sasuke/itachi/neji/kakashi/kiba fanfiction because I have never seen a male harem fanfic for naruto also naruto is the one who become mpreg
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June 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i vote for.
Kakashi/Naruto
This pair wasn't on the list i would like a story of Iruka/naruto.
This story is great, looking forward to reading others.
Kakashi/Naruto
This pair wasn't on the list i would like a story of Iruka/naruto.
This story is great, looking forward to reading others.
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May 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
stop it with da evil cliffy plz
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May 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
no fair you just cant end something like that on a cliffy. it's gonna drive me nuts plz hurry with the next chapter. thankz
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May 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I loved this story i just read it all and its hilarious hurry and update please.
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April 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
(chuckles)Would that last line be literal? I wish this chapter was a little longer but I liked it anyway. Keep up the good work okay?