rate_review Reviews

Hey as usual great story. Sorry to see that someone else is giving you the literal riot act on the Bijuu legend. But you do always say at the begining or end of your story that your making up your demons so don't let it get you down. Your a writer, remember never give up and don't quit, or something like that.. I love the trick Konohamaru did to Naruto and I'm happy to see Hanabi and Hinata reunited. I loved Neji getting pissed at the main branch (may they rest in ...well pieces). I can't wait for the next Atsuki to show up the referee is getting antsy.

Lol, good chapter. Only real complaint is it was too short for me. Oh, ans the clay molding ninja is a dude, just for your imformation. Hmmmm, seems like someone is watching the japanese released of Naruto shippoden. Do you get your episodes from dattebayo? Well, either way good job. I think I might post the first chapter of my fic in a week or two. Dam plot bunny is trying to kill me. The little bastard even managed to get his hands on a machine gun and is trying to hold me hostage. Good thing he dont know about the explosives I set. Lets see who will win, Namer Vs. Plot Bunny. Round one comes next week.

really really really really really really really really great story i luv it cant wait 4 the next chapters if u are going 2 continue

Not bad but deidara is a MALE...

Referee steps out after the battle: WINNER OF THE FIRST FIGHT BETWEEN ATSUKI AND KONOHA/SUNA NINJA; THE KAZAKAGE GAARA OF THE DESERT. I love it, definately Gaara is at his best now that he has something to protect. I know Naruto's friends will still stand by him after all they all know about most of grief he went through his life (the realy nasty stuff I don't think we want to know about, do you?). Referee steps out. KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK AND THANKS FOR THE COOL FIGHT! BELIEVE IT!

Nice update so the plot has thicken. Naruto is goign to think about how to tell his friends he has the demon Kyuubi sealed inside him. Konohomaru and Hanabi like each other and they can relate on some of the same grounds as the other. I smell romance Hope you update soon

Hehehehe, of course I guessed right baka. I think you should know..... I have read every single Naru/hina fic on this site and I am reading many others on many other sites. Unfortunately compulsion plagues my mind so with that in mind now you can see how I guessed it. In fact, I think I know how everything is gonna end up to :). Mwuhahahaahahahahaha, thus is my dark knowledge. Lol, seriously though, I just read WAAAYYYYYYYY too much for my own good. good update though. You did have a few small spelling errors though, if you need a beta just ask and I will help out. Otherwise keep up the good work and update soon.

Aloha! So far a great story as always, it wasn't much of a surprise of Gaara showing up but I still love it when he's in a story. I can't wait to see Konohomaru in action, being a mini-Naruto I can't wait to see him using Naruto's Jutsu's like Bushin Bakuha (Clone Explosion) or even Shuriken or Kunai Kage no Bushin after all a guy has to protect his gal. Sorry if that sounds sexist but I'm a international good old boy at heart. And I'm glad you like my idea but ...uhh which one? Well keep up the great work and remember never give up. BELIEVE IT!

RUN FOR YOUR LIFE GAARA NICE!! NICE GAARA SCARED. I really love how you made Konohamaru and Hanabi togather. I wish there more of them. Great chapter and cant for the next one.

Not bad, Try to stay away from OC's they kind of ruin the story... Your demon in Hinata is fine though. Also I would avoid a shikatema pairing but that is just me. Do what you wish and keep up. Nice updating pace.