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Please don't stop. Just do what makes you happy. There is such potential in this fic. I like how you let Naruto get up and fight, although the relationship between Itachi and Sasuke still confuses me.

Thank you.

I'm so glad Sasuke and Itachi came to Naruto's rescue. About the rest, I really like your stories. "My Little Uke" is one of my favorites. I personally can see Naruto losing his identity. When my husband died, my mother-in-law started to call my son by his father's name, and herself, "mommy". When he started to answer to that name only, and called her 'mommy', I blew a fuse. My father-in-law set her straight. Some times it takes an outsider to reconcile a person to their grief. Maybe you could have Sasuke and Itachi do that for Naruto and his mother. Anyway, please don't stop writing; we would lose an awesome writing talent. Sorry for the babbling. Just felt it had to be said.^_^

Question, was Naruto raped or no? I hope not. Good chapter btw. Looking forward to the next one.

Very Very Good. Your description of both sasuke and naruto's emotions are amazing, and the ending of the 4th chapter where sasuke has sworn to save naruto has intrigued me, and i shall me looking foward to the rest of the story.

Wow. This story definitely carries a very tragic sense about it. The only complaint I would really have is that it is impossible for me to tell the ages of Sasuke and Naruto. At first, I assumed they were very young (around 5 or so) due to what I could gather from physical descriptions. But then their thoughts and the way they talk is far too mature, and at times, Naruto seems like he's a teenager even.

I understand the need to get certain emotions and thoughts across to the readers, but it really is important that if these are the thoughts and emotions of a young child, then they need to appear as if they are actually coming from the child, and not the narrator giving a more in depth explanation to what a child may barely comprehend or understand. Such a thing will definitely help readers relate to the characters much better ^_^

Wah! I almost get all teary knowing how Naruto had to endure all that sadness at such a young age.. Lost his love ones and his identity.. SAsuke go save Naruto!

teehee, poor naru-chan gets molested, its the perfect chance fo sasuke to try and save "her" i wonder if he'll be able to do anything or just get sucked in. maybe itachi will come scare them off? nah, sasuke can be a pretty intimidating ball of angst, even at a precociously early age, he'll save poor narutos virginity... ^.^

*sniff* this story is so sad. Hope to see the next one soon.

the angst the angst how i love the angst. is naruto's mother an unknown character or is she someone from the show. i hope sasuke makes it in time. can't wait to see the next update.

Run Sasuke Run! I hope he makes it in time to save Naruto. Great chapter btw. Could you please let me know when the next chapter is up. Thank you.