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for Breaking Apart

by cloudydayz

person O.O
schedule March 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
AH! PLEASE UPDATE! I'm going crazy!!!!!!
person kotikiz
schedule March 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
aaaa... I can't wait... please update!!!
schedule March 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
YAY! I love you! I'm sorry if I bug you. Haha, but between this and waiting for chapter 345 of the manga, I am going crazy...
person sainaru
schedule March 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
yah finally the smexy scene is coming(it's coming hmmm that sounds weird) oh ohi can't wait for the next chapter and i see u like katavia work too i a fellow lover of her stories lol, i see the next chapter has a sadistic sasuke poor poor naru-chan stuck with a crazy uchiha ( someone save my naru-chan from bastard boy plz lol), plz hurry and update
person dar
schedule March 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
YAHOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!YAY THANKS 4 THE CHAPTER!!!!SADISTIC BUT I LIKE!!! Pleaes update soon!!! i really look forward to it!!!
schedule March 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow, you're almost scaring me lol. I will brave it and read the next chap. This chap made me quite curious. Sasuke is a sadistic bastard here. Something tells me that thats not the tip of the iceberg. Good job.
person Zrina
schedule March 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Here I was thinking about what to write in this review when my brain went "Ah, someone who is using all my favorite letters in their fic: B & D, S & M, S & D... M-O-U-S-E!" I don't know where that last part came from, but it continued. "B-O-N-D-A-GE, M-O-U-S-E! Bondage Mouse, Bondage Mouse.." At that point I decided that I had drank a little bit too much Mtn Dew this morning.

Then of course there is the old joke (roles switched for yaoi goodness):
Judge: Sorry, Minnie, you can't divorce Mickey because you think he's an idiot.
Minnie: I didn't say he was an idiot, I said he was Fucking Goofy!

Yeah...Okay.... About your story now: I think it is fooking HOT. I love hardcore smut (am guilty, *raises hand*) espeically when it gets all twisted and both parties end up happy with the relationship.

Anyway, can't wait for more! I have loved every chapter of it so far. Oro got what he deserved and I love how you get into Sasuke's twisted little mind!
schedule March 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yeah...I'm scared...but I wanna read it...because Naruto came off as a little pain freak kinda. He knows Sasuke's plans on ripping him a new one, one for his own personal use...yet he's all hard-ons and swollen balls there. Hehe but I did enjoy Naruto's smart remark about Sasuke's had everyone else as well. Got a chuckle out of me. It lighted the mood some, which was nice. So yeah I wanna read it...I know it's not going to trun out all sunshine and rainbows...but I have hope that it won't be all bad...something at least will make Naruto continue to want Sasuke. Oh...and will Sasuke every start working with a full deck of cards again, or will he remain crazy?
person Anon
schedule March 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I so so love this fanfic!!!!!! I read it in one swift and i fucking love it. It has so much angst and its so twisted!!! Cant wait for the lemon *_*

P:S: Possessive Sasuke and vulnerable Naruto is love *_*
person Minjin
schedule March 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
^This comment was mine lol forgot to write my name XDDDD

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