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for Breaking Apart

by cloudydayz

person Zrina
schedule March 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
/drools... I liked that chapter a lot. It was interesting to get into Naruto's head. And of course they fit! The sadist and the masochist! I can't wait to read the next chapter, it promises to be really freaking HOT!
person Damp
schedule March 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm not trying to make this into an insult but it's not exactly a compliment either if that's what you think, so you can take it as a compliment or as an insult. You sounded like a therapist for some odd reason. I don't know why but you sounded so...smart o.O right then and there.
person Hanna
schedule March 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Blah, too depresing.


I fucking hate Sasuke.
person Kitty
schedule March 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
UpdateUpdateUpdateUpdateUpdate!!
person kotikiz
schedule March 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I guess there will not be updates... it's realy sad...
but I still hope...
schedule March 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow, just read the story so far and all I can say is wow. Dark, yes . . . hot scenes, well yeah . . .
I like how you have presented it. Sasuke 'saving' Naruto from Orochimaru and killing everyone, I could see it. The possessiveness Sasuke has is interesting too and how Naruto reacts to it. I just wonder if Naruto will take everything and really be broken how Sasuke wants him or rebel? You have given us readers a little peek of Naruto rebeling; even going so far as to suggest leaving Sasuke or cheating on him. Please stay with the story, I'll be keeping a watch for more from you. Thanks for sharing your story.
schedule March 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm going through withdrawel! Wahaha! I hope you update soon.
person kotikiz
schedule March 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It's realy sad that there are no updades so long... please update soon!!!!!
person Anon
schedule March 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*cries* Update.........I'm gonna die!
person Anon
schedule March 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You spoiled us by updating so often, and now you're killing us!

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