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September 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
if this was anything more than a great plot already, i'd be dead
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April 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I think its a good story so far ;-)
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April 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like this chapter the way it is. Please continue!!
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March 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
let naruto continue to be mean to the damn bastard sasuke *evil grins* he deserves the bad treatment for once i soooo tried of the played out mushy falling in love crap (so thats why naruto don't give a damn about sasuke lol)oh by the way ths story ROCKS plz continue this even if im the only one reading lol *hugs* for not writing something cliche.
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March 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Please continue this! I would adore to read it!
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March 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey yes I think your story has great potential. smiles. NaruSasu?
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March 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
great prologue i hope u continue with this story i really like it can't wait to see what happens next.
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February 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was good. I hope you continue this soon.
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February 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really liked it, more please... I think it has more then some potential, you have a good base to go by. Are you trying to have them be cannon based or more OOC, the way you set it up you could go ether way.
I say again, I realy realy liked it, more please.
I say again, I realy realy liked it, more please.
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February 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Interesting chapter. Please continue.