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person A Ravens Song
schedule April 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awww! Naruto is a mommy! Is this going to be an mpreg? Anyway I love it! can't wait for more! Oh yeah how old are Naruto and Itachi?
person rose
schedule March 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
can't wait for sasuke & itachi to come face to face. & also when sasuke finds out that itachi & naruto have been lovers. hmm wonder how it'll turn out.

mpreg would have been a nice touch for this story.
person dana
schedule March 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
a really evil cliffie because itachi was not there and i wonder did he kidnap some pregnant woman force her outside so that he and naruto could have a child of their own. i cannot wait til the next update to find out.
person AoiKitsune
schedule March 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Nani? Nani?! Matte no wat happend? no plz update soon!!!
love ur writing good luck. Ja Ne AoiKitsune =^-^=
person Anon
schedule March 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
luved the cliffy im getting into the plot now, so keep go, thanks
person Bookworm51485
schedule March 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ewwww girls ewwww. It would have been so much better as a little boy. I don't like girls (which is funny as a girl myself). Anyways, I was actually hoping that Naruto would get a family of his own, biologically, but I guess you didn't want to go for an mpreg. Oh well, I'll still just hold out hope. Unless of course, you don't like/write mpreg:'(

But moving on from that, I get so happy everytime I see a non-SasuNaru story. Especially one with Itachi (or Neji or Gaara). Their my three favorites on the show. Especially Gaara.... no Neji....... no Itachi...... AAAAA I love them all equally:D Moving on again:), I'm happy to see that Naruto has gotten his family (or the beginning of one maybe:D), though I'm sure he'll be sad that this woman had to die for him to get one. I wonder how Itachi will react to the baby? He'll probably be mostly happy that Naruto would be happy.

And I wonder what will happen if/when Sasuke and Kakashi find Naruto and Itachi. And see that Naruto is with Itachi willingly. Sasuke would likely be quite pissed at that. I can't wait for his reaction. And Kakashi's of course. I think that would be a hard one to pull off. Kakashi is so.... odd, hard to figure out. I can't even imagine how he'd react.

Anyways, I can't wait for your next update
person malina
schedule March 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
finally a lemon. i wonder how sasuke is gonna react when he finds out. thanks
person dana
schedule March 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
when i first read your summary i was expecting something totally different like an amnesia story or something. however your story turned out to be better and more interesting then i thought. are itaxnar the final pairing.
schedule March 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
-is passed out on her laptop from the utter hawtness of this chapter-
person Anonymous
schedule March 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
LMAO,

I just finished chaoter five, and was about to review that but I sudenly realsied it was updated,


Anyway it's GREAT!!!

(Though the time skip was a little hazy) It's got great potential. (I'm just hoping there isn't going to be a dead Itachi or a Dead Naruto in it)

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