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by Jelp

schedule July 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I am going to own this. I fell out of my chair at the ending. Literally down I went holy cow did I not see that coming. This was beautifully written I can't wait to read you other stories.
schedule November 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is definitely one of my favorites fics!!! I love just about every single aspect of it: how you tried to stick to the actual plot while adding your own, how the original characters were respected (Sasuke's such a half-crazed bastard!!), how it turned out to be a not-so-happy ending but not a depressing one either...Did I mention your writing's one of the best on aff? At least in my opinion.
Oh! and a special mention for Dokueki the perverted snake, that's a stroke of genius.
Maybe I'm getting a little bit carried away but I should have reviewed Restless months ago so I'm making up for it. Can't wait for Identity Crisis to be done.
person jonna594
schedule October 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
God, I just love your stories. Can't wait until you post your new one. Please, please send me a note when it's out? My email is jonna594@hotmail.com. Thank you.
person JJ
schedule October 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love the way u wrote this story even thou i know alot of this dident happen in the manga and anime. I t makes alot of sence when i wonder how naruto an saske became close to eachother. I like the story I just dident like the ending, it actualy made me cry. Yaeh so when u releas the sequal let me know.


And i want u to keep writeing the stories that actualy follow the story line so dont stop the good work.
person Anon
schedule September 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This was a great story. The end made me weep, and then go "wtf?". For a moment I thought Sasuke had been in Dokueki's body. x3

darth-taco@hotmail.com

Pleeeease email me when you've posted "Identity Crisis"!
person hina88
schedule September 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Again. So no what I expected. I'm kind of shocked at how it ended. For a few seconds I thought that Sasuke was really dead and my eyes just kept widening more and more but then - naruto started hearing his voice and I was like, is it a ghost or something? I think I was as out of it as Naruto lol, but then (again like Naruto) I paid attention to what Sasuke said and I was like 'oohhh' but still a little shocked lool :D this is going to be interesting. Three minds housed in one body - heh, I feel a bit sorry for Naruto.

I'll be on the look out for the next one ^_^ Ja ne!

Hina xXxx
schedule September 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
But I want to read a whole new story...please? *puppy dog eyes* Please don't let it end like this...
person leanne
schedule September 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wonderfull! I am so glad Sasuke's not dead, i hope to read your sequel soon.
person Exist
schedule September 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Really liked your story.I will like to see the new one too.
schedule September 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WOW...What is Sasuke going to do...no body which means no SEX!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! unless Sasuke takes over Naruto's body and have fun....Well can't wait for Identity Crisis!!!

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