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for Memories of the Future

by BishounenKrazed

person roely
schedule April 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
so sad! but so good!
person DevilLived
schedule April 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh my God, I love this story so far. I'm really hoping that everything will work out! Keep up the awesome work!
schedule April 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I don't think that I've reviewed recently but I am now. ^^ Honestly, that was a hilariously bittersweet chapter and I loved every minute of it. Poor Sasuke doesn't know that his dobe's right under his nose and gods, is it giving him anguish, eh? I loved the ending as well. I could totally picture Naruto saying that in the middle of the wedding! I bet that Kiba would've been cracking up so hard at that, too. I can picture it and everything. :P
person dyessie
schedule April 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wahhh..!! im crying..! really.. sasuke's in pain.. and naruto cant be there.. well.. technically, yes.. but still..!! wahh..TT_TT.. so much angst and sadness.. hey dear author.. please dont let sasuke fall in love with yuki.. i said this so because since yuki is currently acting alot like naruto.. i think sasuke will develop something for yuki....!! please..! dont let that happen.. >,<.. sasuke must project some long-time faithgulness you know.. and it would be more sweet and heart-clenching ending if sasuke would be overjoyed at naruto's appearance as he tell that he was yuki all those times and that he is very pleased that sasuke was that faithfull and stuff.. waahhahaha..!! please update soon.. im eager to know the next chapter.. excellent work.. keep rockin dude..! update please.. you dont want to make your avid readers t wait in pain, ne? ^^
person Anon
schedule April 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
PLEEASE DON'T KILL SASUKE...I LOVE YOUR STORY....I THINK THAT IT IS SWEET AND HOPE THAT IN THE END NARUTO CAN ONCE AGAIN BE WITH HIS TEME
person Moon Dragon
schedule April 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh, Poor Sasuke, from what I'm seeing he's got a bad case of "Love Bird Syndrom". He maybe living for his children now, but as soon as they are old enough to fend for themselves (Yuki too) he's probally going to finally let go, and die of a broken heart. Kyuubi, hurry up and fix things! Sasuke isn't going to keep pushing forwerd much longer, not when he is constently being reminded of Naruto now. HURRY!
person sharingan.swirl
schedule April 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I think you should have Sasuke use his genius-ness and figure out that it IS naruto.... Since Naruto is slipping up a lot, and Kakashi knows.... Sasuke can totally get away with finding out! That way, Naruto isn't "telling" Sasuke... and won't get in trouble for it. :)

My pointless ramble.... I love it! Poor Sasuke... *cries* Looking forward to more!
person Damp
schedule April 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG! I am so CLINGY to this fic! And I so LOVED Sasuke's POV, it was so sad when he kept coming back to the present. :( I can't wait to see what cmes next...and no you must not kill Sasuke! He's an important preson in this fic >.,
schedule April 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG i loved this chap! It's my fav to date, and not just cuz of the smut, which was awesomeness btw, but because it had so much...emotion in it. Sasuke's memories, and Yuki/Naruto acting like Naruto and Sasuke being affected by it. I loved it so very much. And Naruto acting like Naruto is quite funny and very heart warming too. I suppose that family could use some light right? I can't wait to see what happens next. Do update soon.
person Kaishiou
schedule April 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i love this chapter...especially the flashback, really brought more light to how their past and love was like. the humor at the end also cracks me up. nice one. do continue ^^

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