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for Memories of the Future

by BishounenKrazed

person bevino
schedule April 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Man, this last chapter was so freaking funny! Hahaha ^_^ I really like your fanfiction, and I onder why I haven't read it earlier. I mean, since all of you other fanfictions are so great. Anyway, I read all you have written so far today, and I have to say that I am really impressed, and I also have to say that I can't wait for the next chapter. Not that you have to feel like you have to hurry or anything - I have all the time in the world. Thank you!
schedule April 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*falls off chair laughing* rofl that was too funny *wipes tears from face* those pranks rock, and now that Kei found out, that's so cool, he will help Naruto for sure :D I can't wait till you update again, I love this chapter it made me smile and laugh so hard *hug*
person Allys
schedule April 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG!! ROFLMAO!! That was Great! Perfection! All the pranks :wipes a tear: and everyone's reaction! "I'm a little Teme-pot short and stout" LMAO!!! I'm so happy now. I'm glad to see that Naruto is still irrepressible and incorrigable. AND YAY!!! Now Kei knows!! This chapter was perfect - Happy dancing - I think I could HUGGLE you to Death!!! You're amazing XD. I can't wait for the next chappie ;D
person evy
schedule April 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
the story is good bot it is starting to get boring can you get on with it. sorry i don't mien to be rude.
person mike~
schedule April 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wah! this has got to be one of the best chapters ive read in quite a long while!

i loved all the pranks that naruto was able to pull - and with his son kei as well. its really fitting how kei was the next to discover naruto's secret. Since you've made kei's personality more similar to naruto, this means that he can better understand and accept certain parts of naruto without prejudice or any negative reactions - kei's open nature will be more willing to embrace he's father's return.

the pranks were really well thought out; it's sorta like naruto's way of saying "hi, im back" subtly (well, as subtle as naruto can be) without giving direct implications of his actual return. it'll allow the people of konoha to slowly remember the good old times and appreciate things that were once forgotten.

Thx so much for writing this. i know its too soon to be demanding an update, so i'll settle for waiting for the next installment =)
person Rami
schedule April 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow that last line killed me!
I can't wate till your next chapter, this is such an awsome fic!
person roely
schedule April 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
that was funny! i was lughing my ass off! i loved it! and now Kei knows it his dad!
person Yukire
schedule April 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG, this just turned into my favorite current fanfic!!! Please don't stop writing, I'm soooo intriiigued!
schedule April 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yes, yes a million times over--that was so much fun to read! XD When it came time for the complaints, I was trying to imitate Naruto and Kei and not burst into loud fits of laughter. It was difficult, I tell you, difficult! XD Honestly, I loved this chapter, and I'm glad that Naruto's got someone else who knows his secret. ^^ I can't wait for the next part now. :P
schedule April 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*ROFLMAO* That was GREAT!

And I can´t wait for the next chapter.

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