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Who care's if their are spelling mistakes and if characters are ooc the story is fucking grate so keep on writing.

I like you story the way it is. I'm not disgusted at all by it. Just wanted to let you know.

not to be rude, just to help you out, sometimes when you do spell check it doesn't catch the words that are spelled correctly, but out of place. exp: their vs. there, it wont catch this cuz it's spelled right but not in the right context...i think that's the right word...anyway um, I didn't really notice any/many mistakes, don't remember cuz I've been reading a lot of stories lately. and like you said if it's ooc too bad, that'd how you want it to be, it's ur story and if ooc is a part of it then that's just fine people don't have to read it if they don't like it. anyway i liked your story, i think it was going places and it was pretty good, don't let what others say bother you too much. it's one thing if you wrote a really shitty story(which you didn't by the way, it was pretty good even for having not written for a while), vs. writing a story that isn't half bad to say the least.

- snow_angel

Wow!! Four new cbapters in one day,awesome!! Will Naruto and Sasuke get together? I hope so. Hurry with the next chapter or chapters.

I hope that Kakashi and Hokage kicks that ASSHOLE Gokai ASS. poor Sasuke living like that. Udate soon I have to see what happens next.


P.S. Grate chapter

Kay, this story has a ton of mistakes.

1. It's too short.
2. There are a /lot/ of mistakes
3. All the characters are ooc in this chapter.
4. Get a BETA. BETA's can help improve stories.

We've established the fact that you want your stories kept short, but dont'cha think it'd be nice to make them NOT ooc, and spaced out? I think so. Revise the chapters, repost them. If you can't do it yourself advertise for a BETA.

Poor Sasuke. I hope Kakaishi can fix this mess. Hurry the next chapter!!!

Slow? What's that mean? Anyway, thanks for updating!
ja ne

nyuh? update 'cause I am not sure exactly what you have planned... it was a bit rushed but intriguing. Ok?