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by DreamsOfShadow

schedule February 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
weeeeeeeeeeeeh i think im the 16th reviewer


so that means u'll finish the story... am i ryt or am i ryt? hahaha


enywei i think u shud really finish this...


they might actually kill u (if they won't, then i will)


oh and i agree with the other reviewer hu told u u're not evil coz u like narusasu and vice versa... (^^,


soooooooooo pleaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaassssssssssssssssseeeeeeeeeeeeeeee do it...


THNKZ

--fie
person Natha
schedule February 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Mhhh... Finish it... what's the right word... Ah yes... NOW! :D

As for spelling errors: You've once written crowd with "e" (crowed) at the beginning and once you've made Naruto a "she" (and we all like him best when being a "he" ;-)).

So, now please finish. There are definitely too few NaruSasu oneshots out there and yours is really promising!

Greetings
Nathaniel
schedule February 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like this fic so far... The head banging was great and I am happy to see a narusasu fic. Please finish it.

ss
person Allys
schedule February 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
O.o ZOMG!!!!! FINISH IT. FINISH IT NOW!!!!!!!! I'll pull the fucking trigger and drop bombs biatch!! LOL, I'm not really mad, I'm just in shock XP. You're killing me here, THIS IS FUCKING AWESOME. You NEED to finish it!!!! Come on... this is worse than chinese water torture, you meanie. LOL.
person saxis
schedule February 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I loved it so far and I really hope that you will finish it!
person feisu
schedule February 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
just update will you? you're killing us with stretching the time of this hot lemon you got there, or it seem to be *winks* so update soon, but I wont shot you... if you like NaruSasu (or SasuNaru) you can not be a bad person *laughs*
person Draco_Sirius
schedule February 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE!!!!!!!!!! Finish it!! I need my sexy yaoi smut!!!
It's truly wonderful, and yeah, there are some typos (like hat instead of hot...)
Draco Sirius =^..^=
schedule February 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I have no problem with pulling that trigger really - that was so MEAN mean mean mean mean mean... so yeah - I think you get the point lol...

So... update soon (like today?)

Hina xXxxx
schedule February 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Consider the trigger pulled.

antilogicgirl: *performs Orochimaru's resurrection technique* Now FINISH!

^_^'

Sorry for the outburst, but geesh! I thought I was a tease, but you're worse than I am!
schedule February 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I think this makes me 10, please continue , c ya

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