rate_review Reviews

I really enjoy long chapters. I personally think that there are not enough Shino/Naru fics out there and yours was especially well written. As for Lemons, well I'm a yaoi pervert so of course I would vote for one, but really this is your story and if you don't think that you could do it then thats fine as well. Hoping for a new chapter. Me

either a two shot or a short multi-chaptered fic would be nice. personally, i rather get the two shot but if its eaiser on you to write the multi-chapters, go for it. i just like long reads. (^__^) now the thought on the lemon: true, this fic isn't about a physical relationship between shino and naru but more about a personal/intimate relationship between the two and us seeing the changes as they occur. but shinoxnaru lemons are so rare, that it would be a real treat to see an exceptionally well written one with loads of emotions attached to it. one that would inspire and hopefully influence other authors to this pairing. i say: go for the lemon! but either way, i'm looking foward to whatever you choose!!!

~Devious

OMFG~! This was awesome! Continue please! Make Sasuke suffer for his idiocy and make Sakura suffer when she realizes she's just being used as a baby maker! Mwahaha!

Can't wait until the next chapter!

Ja ne
~Sin

Hey, that was a fantastic chapter, so much. I was sad for Naruto catching Sasuke bedding mega-forehead. The touching scene in the hokage's office with Tsunade and Shino made me cry, it was very emotional. The insight on why Sasuke did what he did, made me understand, but he's still a bastard for hurting Naruto.

Oh and the ending with Naruto and Shino was just so cute, I love it how you have portrayed Shino. I haven't actually found many good Shino/Naruto pairing stories, and was very happy to find yours. So, hope to see chapter 2 soon. And you said that it was only going to be a two-shot. So, I hope in the next chapter, Naruto actually gets pregnant by Shino, and it's all good to rub it in Sasuke's face.

Anyway, please update soon, I really wanna know what happens next.

Ja and take care.

Yes!! Yes!! Please write more on this, i wish you would make it a multi-chapter but i'll take what i can get. I really like this story!!! I love how you developed Shino, cause he doesn't get a backstory like most other people in Naruto but he is so very pimp. Yeah, i thought he was definately a different person to be paired up with Naruto, but you did it convincingly(sp?). Besides that, as much as I like SasuNaru, i do like fics like this too where Sasuke gets it for being such an ass and Naruto pairs up with someone else that loves him and has been glaring at Sasuke from behind corners. Anyways, great story!! Please update, i'll give you e-cookies!!!

I love what you have of this story so far. Actually he is a good pairing for Naruto I can't wait to read more.

O I CAINT WAIT FOR THE LAST CHAPTER IM ALREADY ON THE EDGE OF MY SEAT JUST THINKING ABOUT IT!!! SHIKAMARU WOULD HAVE BEEN A GOOD CHOICE FOR NARUTO BUT YOUR RIGHT SHINO NEVER GETS ANY CREDIT. I CAINT WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOON!!!!!!!

I don't know I personally love Shino and also think he does not get enough attention. I mean come on, he is so cool! I think this is a good pairing and you should stick with it!
ja ne

I forgot. Sasuke is a bastard!
ja ne

THIS HAS GOT TO BE THE BEST FIC IN THE WORLD!!!! I CAINT WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER!! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOON!!!!!!!!