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I think that you should continue this fic. I would like to read about the reactions of everyone else in Konoha and the Rookie 9. Please send me an email when you update.

I love this story- You never see this pairing and it makes me very happy that someone has done it. Shino never gets the loving he should and I feel that Sasuke constently take Naruto for grantet. (not that I don't love SasuNaru fics....) I hope you continue to write more to this. I'm very intrested in the plot and were it is going- not just the sex. (that doesn't always happen. lol) I want to find out how naruto gets over sasuke and how sasuke responds once he finds Shino/Naruto together. Looking forward to your next update!

I really hope you do update and finish this story (and in one long chapter too,) hehe.

Personally, so long as you're taking suggestions, I'd love to see the story continue with maybe some nervious first experience ShinoNaru smut that ends with Naruto's overwhelming joy at waking up to find Shino cuddled up against him the following morning, leaving the fox vessel with an unfamiliar feeling of warmth, acceptance, worth, and love. ^^ Then a flash forward to Sasuke back in Konoha. 8 months have passed with nothing regarding Naruto. Sakura still isnt pregnant, but is constantly around feeling somewhat secure in their couplehood. Sasuke is filled with nothing but regret regarding his decission, but figures he's not going to put all that time spent with Sakura to waste so he's been putting up with her to hopefully impregnate her and be done with it. When Naruto and Shino return to the village, Naruto is completely over Sasuke and moves in with Shino. Sasuke, hearing that his dobe is back, goes to the blonde's apartment to confess his true feelings, only to find that the blonde has moved. Tsunande will not tell him anything about his whereabouts and Sasuke is miserable. After some legwork and finally comming across Naruto with Shino (whom he does not know is with him romantically), Sasuke somewhat angerly attempts to yell at Naruto for avoiding him, only to be shocked speachless at a sight of a pregnant Naruto who is just starting to show.

The whole thing needs to end with Sasuke feeling a massive loss and Naruto telling him off with Shino wrapping his arms around him. Sasuke sees that everything he ever wanted walking out of his life forever (go Naruto! Hooray self-worth!) and quite frankly could go die in a ditch somewhere afterwards since, quite frankly he deserves it the bastard(!), but the whole ditch part should probably be best left out of the story since it would ruin the impact of the ending. Happy Naruto and Shino walking off together = best ending ever!

=^^= hehehe.

of course, feel free to end the story anyway you like. your first chapter has already more then proven your skill as an author and story teller so I'm sure whatever you decide on will be fine. keep pu the good work!

Please continue the story. I really want to know what happens next between Naruto and Shino (one of my fav pairings) and what happens with Sasuke after that.

i would like to c more chapters in this fic. i want to see wat happends between naruto and sasuke and of course the relationship of shino and naruto going further. sasuke MAJORLY hurt naruto and i want to see wat happends when they meet agian seeing as sasuke still loves naruto. i hope you update sooooooooooooon!!!

Personally, I think it could go either way. The tone of the story wouldn't be destroyed if you added one (and it would satisfy many people's inner fangirls), but at the same time an implied lemon would compliment the relationship building you're trying to achieve. I would also like to see this become a mini multi-chaptered story because, although you've succeeded in writing a complete one-shot, you've also peeked my interest in the ShinoNaruto pairing and I would love to see more from you on this couple.

Either way, I'm a big YES! Good luck and I can't wait to see more beautiful writing from you.

Ja ne
~Sin

I personally love this fic. I like the way you've written it, and I like the way that Naruto and Shino are progressing towards each other. If I had my way, I'd say that this would be a long multi-chapter, because I love well written long multi-chapters. I'm interested in how their relationship would progress long term. And I can't help but be curious of the kids they'd have.

But since I can't always have my way, I do think that it should be a multi-chapter for as long as you're willing to take it. I wasn't sure about this pairing at first, but you wrote it very well and I love it.

I think that a lemon would be a sweet/romantic add-on, I mean like the sappy kind and nothing too crazed. So, there's my two cents. Please update!! ^_^

many chapters, coz it makes it easier to read and possibley more story time....>.> <.< :D
and yes to lemon if u can swing it(it doesn't have to be as detailed as 'Let me') but no to lemon if it's gonna ruin the story. hope this helps :)

...half my reveiw got lost....>.< no lemon if it's gonna ruin the story. would be good if u can swing it but its not vital. ^^ might i just add that i reckon u are the AWESOMEST for writing a shinonaru fic?

this fic is really good, and I think you should continue it, it would kinda of ruin it or throw it off if you just threw in a lemon out of no where and it should be about the relationship. so it would be nice if you wrote out a few chapters and then maybe after everything is said and done you can add a lemon, but if people complain just add a few intamate parts here and there like you did in the first chapter. yay for shino and naruto there really arn't enough of this pairing around. sasuke you ass how could you! >,< and the pink wonder is just a bitch for going along with the bastard.