rate_review Reviews

Please oh please update! This is such a well written story! With so much emotions, just brimming out in every paragraph!

Hmmm... It doesn't matter to me if it would be a two-shot fic or mulit chater one as long as the story continues. And yes, the LEMON!!! There must be a lemon! A smoldering hot lemon ending up with a little bundle of joy in Shino and Naru-chan's arms. That would be sweet! And don't forget to RUB it in the UCHIHA-teme's face so he could wallow on his own guilt. I would love to see him suffer (not that I hate the guy, but he hurts Naruto far too many times for my own liking...)and SUFFER he will, ne?

Please, plese oh please update... Naru-chan deserves a lot of happiness for all the suffering he has gone through...

i want to see this fic be a tow-shot!! i caint wait this is a awseom fic!!

Well maybe you should do a two-shot and have a short yet passionate lemon showing how much Shino really does love Naruto, show about Shino's family in their reaction about Shino and Naruto. I'd say in the end, Shino's family would help them get ready for marriage and Naruto should get preg and the family is helping him get through the preg and your desicion about gender should be yours. But yeah, I'm kinda random at times so, hopefully this makes sense. Have fun! X3 I still enjoy this story!

ou really have to keep gong with this story i want to see naruto have a happy ending and maybe have shino be worthy enough

lemon please!! and longer too, this story got me hooked on shino/naruto.

full on descriptive lemon with lots of fluff and devotion of two souls in love,finding love and creating it...maybe add fluff along the way to help boost plot line devlopment, as well as add some drama for effect.

plz dont chop up the chapters,i like how long they r it feels like they r long enough with out becoming overly so.do keep up the good work and i do so hope to see some more of this wonderfully made piece soon...

ja ne
blueinu

It doesn't really matter to me which one you pick. I know indesicive people are the worst but if I had to pick i guess I would pick the two-shot. I actually really like this couple but I guess many authors dont or dont know how to write them well. I think that you are doing a great job. Until next time ^.~
~Ana~

Wow. This is good.

Ehm...though I can't decide to end it here or there.

Anyway... really love Shino and Naruto.

make it a twoshot please it's so good add the lemon but also as your takein suggestions i think you should empisize the love factor between shino and naru as you have been doing during the smut and when shino and naruto return sakura has just concived a child so sasuke is starting to feel better, well a couple days after they get back sasuke sees them at ichrakus and is going to talk to naruto and tell him he is sorry and that sakura has conviced when he sees shino and naruto kissing passionatly then reviled is shino's sadistic streak as he sees the uchiha staring at them and furthers the kiss then shino lets go and naruto turns around to see what shino is looking at and finds sasuke who is writhing in anger and says something along the lines of "oh sakura's pregnant" and either naruto or shino say that naruto is too makeing the uchiha bastard feel like shit.

or at least something that makes sasuke look like the retard he is, but you don't have to follow my suggestions i just want to see sasuke feel even worse than he made naruto feel

2-shot please! ^_^