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February 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh. my. fucking. god.
shit.
i've been searching for ages for a shinonaru fic that was well written and up to now, i never found one. there were few of them, and none was good enough... but this one, oh, this one. you're an awesome author that thankfully for us decided to write of a minor pairing. love. *huggles close*
the descriptions were absolutely awesome, and what to say of the characterization, the grammar and the length? i mean, shit girl. it's one of the most beautiful and well written fics i ever found. you have a sheer ability to bring out emotions and describe them vividly, and gods, i felt pain myself for naruto throughout the whole chapter. i think you put everything in a very reasonable and realistic way, from naruto's love for sasuke (he'd give his life away for him) to sasuke's decision to have a baby (i don't approve. i think he's a fucking bastard who betrayed naruto, thinking he would be forgiven just because it's naruto we're talking about. he should have asked. he didn't deserve naruto's complete love and devotion), to shino. gods, i love shino. it's strange that in the last few fics i read shino appears to be more observant on naruto's behaviour and a great friend (heck, even in a fic of mine i am working onto he's like this) but your shino is absolutely awesome.
i can't wait to see where this fic evolves to, because i would be disappointed if in the end sasuke were to get naruto back. he doesn't deserve this love, whilst shino could show naruto what receiving love is like. they're such a cute crack couple *loves more*
more so, the length. thanks for the long long chapter. it felt perfectly long, and i appreciated it. but more so i appreciated how you put all your power to write it wonderfully until the end, to shino's confession and naruto's reaction. many authors with long chapters give up around the middle and rush off to the end to finish soon.
you didn't, and i worship you for this.
all said, i hope you continue this fic that deserves reviews (just to warn you, mine will always be long. i hate short reviews. a good reviewer knows how much reviews mean to authors). i'll publicize this, it's too awesome for words. ^^
thanks for writing, i will be waiting for more whenever you feel like posting (i don't like to force people to update soon, i know what it feels like to be pressured).
much love.
SOY/MF/Ceph
shit.
i've been searching for ages for a shinonaru fic that was well written and up to now, i never found one. there were few of them, and none was good enough... but this one, oh, this one. you're an awesome author that thankfully for us decided to write of a minor pairing. love. *huggles close*
the descriptions were absolutely awesome, and what to say of the characterization, the grammar and the length? i mean, shit girl. it's one of the most beautiful and well written fics i ever found. you have a sheer ability to bring out emotions and describe them vividly, and gods, i felt pain myself for naruto throughout the whole chapter. i think you put everything in a very reasonable and realistic way, from naruto's love for sasuke (he'd give his life away for him) to sasuke's decision to have a baby (i don't approve. i think he's a fucking bastard who betrayed naruto, thinking he would be forgiven just because it's naruto we're talking about. he should have asked. he didn't deserve naruto's complete love and devotion), to shino. gods, i love shino. it's strange that in the last few fics i read shino appears to be more observant on naruto's behaviour and a great friend (heck, even in a fic of mine i am working onto he's like this) but your shino is absolutely awesome.
i can't wait to see where this fic evolves to, because i would be disappointed if in the end sasuke were to get naruto back. he doesn't deserve this love, whilst shino could show naruto what receiving love is like. they're such a cute crack couple *loves more*
more so, the length. thanks for the long long chapter. it felt perfectly long, and i appreciated it. but more so i appreciated how you put all your power to write it wonderfully until the end, to shino's confession and naruto's reaction. many authors with long chapters give up around the middle and rush off to the end to finish soon.
you didn't, and i worship you for this.
all said, i hope you continue this fic that deserves reviews (just to warn you, mine will always be long. i hate short reviews. a good reviewer knows how much reviews mean to authors). i'll publicize this, it's too awesome for words. ^^
thanks for writing, i will be waiting for more whenever you feel like posting (i don't like to force people to update soon, i know what it feels like to be pressured).
much love.
SOY/MF/Ceph