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Mmm, good yuri. Considering the quality of most PWP yuri fics, you might as well just proclaim lordship of the section right now. The only competition I can think of was a nicely done Tema/TenTen, but that has apparently vanished, so pwnage to you. Write more :p

I don't know if I've reviewed this before, I forgot to check. And, frankly, I don't care. I'm disgusted with myself for not having done so earlier when I read this originally.

Anyway, I'll do it now. This is a flawless piece. I love the interaction. All I can say is, since this is a oneshot, I hope for a sequel. While the pairing isn't believable by any sense of canon, it's one of my favorites regardless. I just hate the fics where it's Naru/Sasu, and Sakura gets relegated to some kind of third wheel who's happy for them both. A boy who loves you, and the boy you love, and they've *both* decided to be with each other over you? It's quite the ego crushing blow, and who would begrudge Sakura a little human comfort?

Matter of fact, I encourage it. Wholeheartedly, if it keeps turning out like this.

Keep writing, and I'll keep reviewing. ;)
~LZ

Damn, that was erotic. I loved it, it must be the best HinaSaku I've ever read.... I loved what Sakura did in the ending, and I love Neji's whole protecitve bit

Wow! Great fucking Yuri!

That was really great! I hope you can do a Tenten x Hinata like this one!