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for A Natural Progression

by desolatebutterfly

schedule March 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
...Y-You tease! How could you just leave me hanging like that?!
schedule February 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Nice. I love voyeurism/exhibitionism. Especially when it involves an Uchiha. Well written also! I love your short fics.
person NinPao
schedule January 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
GAH!! That's the end of it?! No way!!

haha you made my eyes snap open there for a minute. you really should consider a chapter 2. *amused*
schedule January 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was cute in only the way Itachi can be cute. I didn't go, "awww!!" and squeal, but it did make me chuckle a little. You're very articulate even when adding humor into the mix. I like to see that because too often fics with humor are styalistically inferior, a weakness to which I myself have been guilty. Cheers.

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