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for Deeply Loveless

by CrazedDoll

person Dragon7
schedule February 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hi



I love your story "Deeply Loveless”. I see you have not update in a while and I hope that you have not given up on it because “Deeply Loveless” way too good to be left in the dust. I can’t wait to read the next chapter so please keep on writing and UPDATE SOON.
schedule October 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
love the story line so far plez continue the story ok
person Dragon7
schedule January 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I was looking for chapter five on Saturday and it was not their. I. hope to see it posted this week maybe with chapter six to please update soon.
person Dragon7
schedule January 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
yet another grate chapter Keep them coming and update soon.
person Dragon7
schedule January 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Poor Sasuke I hope the we find out whats wrong with him next chapter and I really really hope that the babys alright. I am so loving the fast update so keep on going and I hope to see the next chapter posted soon.
schedule January 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I wanted to enjoy this fic, but I really couldn't get past all the spelling mistakes. You have "growned" for "groaned" and other various mishaps that just throw me right out of the story. I think if you spellchecked your work, or got someone to proofread for you, it would turn out much better.

Keep trying,

des
person Dragon7
schedule January 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love this chapter!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I am so happy that you deiced to make a Sasuke mpreg fiction!!!!!! I love them. I can't what to read the next chapter so keep on writing and update soon.

P.S. I am so happy that you’re not the type of author who leave their reads hanging for weeks or even times months.
schedule January 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ooo. Chiffhanger. Update soon. Hope to see what happens next. ^^
person Dragon7
schedule January 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Grate chapter I hope that the baby is alright. I can't what to read the next chapter so update soon.

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