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by Erisabesu

person Total Truth
schedule January 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow.. This is great!! I was rooting for sasunaru ... but it is still good. are you planning on continuing this or was this a one shot?
Please continue it!!! *Crosses Fingers*
person roely
schedule January 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
great story but i love sasu and naru
person celticfx
schedule January 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
thank you for such a refreshing take on sasuke and naruto's relationship! its nice to see naruto stand up to sasuke and make him accountable for his past instead of jumping right into his bed. i especially enjoyed how you kept everyone in character and found the open ending really enjoyable. will sasuke get naruto back after a year is over?? i'd LOVE to see you write a sequal someday to answer this question. (: either way, i look forward to reading more from you in the future! ^_^
schedule January 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*Sighs dramatically* What can I say? It was...beautiful.

I feel so moved. I am actually happy that Sai won in the end. Is that the end? Hehehehe ^_^ Anyway I was left reading, laughing, gasping and sniffling to the end. Very well written...man I was too caught up in reading to notice any errors so trust me it's perfect. And umm...Wow just keep those kind of stories coming. I applaude. *Claps*
schedule January 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hey, that was really, really good. i like the idea of a SasuNaruSai triangle. i loved your characterizations (fricking Ino was hilarious) and everything was written beautifully. god, i loved that part with Sai and Sasuke. the whole time while i was reading that, i was thinking "the boy is good, THAT boy is good!". jealous Sasuke is a very entertaining Sasuke. lol. anyway, when i first started reading this i was hoping that it would be multi-chaptered but i like the way you ended it with Sasuke counting down the days before he'll begin his pursuit of Naruto's love. thanks for sharing. i look foward to your next fic with these three. ja!
schedule January 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh! just a question: whats going on with "Everyone's Got Secrets"? has it been discontinued or just on the back burner waiting for inspiration to come your way for it? sorry if i sound pushy. ^__^ but i really liked that story and would like to know what its status is...

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