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for We Intertwined

by AubreyWitch

person Anon
schedule May 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love this :) It's a new (for me) take on my favorite pairing in Naruto, and I love the way it works. For some reason, it seems natural - Sasuke being a little withdrawn, yet sort of silently agressive and encouraging in his own way, and Sakura is the pushiest one - because she is already sure about Sasuke and she does know how much Naruto crushes on her. I love the way she's so confident in her sexuality too. :) And Naruto being eager yet extremely nervous, because I do believe he would be. He would be utterly afraid to lose not just one of them but both of them at the same time. It's like a dream come true yet scaryscaryscary, because he must feel like he's walking on thin ice. And you showed it perfectly. It feels so *right*. The little funny moments here and there are adorable. *__*
person poornmiserable
schedule May 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
that last line was hilarious...i hope this is not the end....great work on this i really do hope it continues
person Anon
schedule May 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
you are, like, the BEST threesome writer ever. i jes hope you know that.
person kyu000
schedule May 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this is so hot! please keep it going and update soon! im a huge sasunaru fan but the way you threw sakura in there was 'kay. most people who write a sasu/naru/saku fic make naruto completly crazy over sakura and that ends up ruining it for us sasunaru fans! thanks for keeping naruto's 'curiosity' going for both of them =) (makes 3 or 4 different 'fan clubs' all happy, ya' know?) i can't wait till you update again ill be looking out for this fic! ja ne!
person hey-nonny-nonny
schedule May 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG!! You must continue; i love the way that you're explaining Naruto's state of mind, and the smut is great!
person Reba
schedule May 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
exellently writen! Nice job keeping every one in character. I accually liked Sakura and this coming from a Sakura basher. Keep up the amazingness.
person mary
schedule May 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OH NO YOU DID NOT!!! you left a horny cliffy!!!! NOT FAIR!!!! please finish with this!!! *massive nosebleed central*
person Anon
schedule March 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like it a lot, though I usually prefer longer stories with lots of plot involved. :D
person Sutashii
schedule February 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Damned Im not usually one for Sakura/Sasuke/Naruto fics this would be my first but I think im definitely going to be reading more of these if there like this one! Wonderful job
schedule February 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I want more... please?? this was so well written... I loved the halfhearted protests... and the forcefully tender way they made him theirs... continue? I wanna know if it was only a one time thing or if it continued...ne?

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