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for When Mercury Mixes With Jade

by elaynabrooks

schedule December 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM

Yay!! Chapter 7! Thanks for updating. Man, lately, I've been having a hard time trying to find some decent fics to read (I still can't believe that there's like 4 male/male fics for every Het story!!), so I was really lookiing forward to this chapter.

About the length of your story... don't you think 40 chapters is a bit too long? especially if they're all the length of the previous chapters. Not that I'm complaining...

And finally, if you like long fics, I really recommend you read "Show and Tell", a Neji-Tenten fic, written by Akiradawn. It has like 40 or 45 chapters and I really liked it.

OK, once again, thanks for the update, I'm going to start reading now, and I'll post a review with my opinion later.
person Geda
schedule December 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Mmm, I love this story. ^^ Thank you for keeping up with it.

You're making me consider a Sakura x Shino pairing in the Sims...
person oohshiny
schedule November 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
.....DAMMIT HURRY UPPP!! I ish sad when dere int any new chappies... ='(
person Anon
schedule November 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I am patiently awaiting the next chapter in this very rivoting fic! Okay, I am desperate...what happens with Sakura and Shino? How does his b-day party go? Don't be cruel!!!!
person oohshiny
schedule November 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMGGGGGG ITS BEEN SO LONG SINCE I PUT A STORY IN MY SQUEEEEEEEEEEE SECTION!!! YOU'D BETTER UPDATE THIS STORY SOON!!!!! also email me when you update!!!! my email address is deannathx@comcast.net
schedule October 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
So....where's the next chappy?? Seems I've been waiting forever for it..
person Anon
schedule October 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Still waiting patiently for the next update...no pressure. I too love this pairing. And you are right! Why isn't there more written about these two? Thanks for doing this. Great read...please continue!!!
schedule October 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM

Hey, Kiyasume! I finished reading your "Strawberries" fic yesterday, and I must say it was... delicious. All of your descriptions had my mouth watering over all the food... and over Sakura as well.

Anyway, when I read it, I couldn't help but wonder what happened to your "Mercury - Jade" fic? It was so on the right track! And now I'm aching to know what will happen.

Please update soon! Please? Pretty please?
person Anon
schedule September 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I have read this fic soooo many times. I will faithfully wait for your update. Just out of curiosity, when will that be? No pressure...but...HURRY! I just love th Aburame! Shibi is so hot!!! Okay, so is his son...wow!! I am so bad!!!
person Anon
schedule September 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OOOO I cant wait for the next chapter!!!!!!!11

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