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for In Death

by Hiiroshoken

schedule December 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was intense and seriously well written. Thoroughly enjoyable all round. Makes me wish I had a few more thumbs to stick up for you. LOL You should be ridiculously proud of yourself! I mean it. To the point of complete narcissism even! Bravo!
schedule December 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
that was sad in a good way. i think i would like a sequel.
schedule October 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This was a great prequel! Really enjoyed it.
schedule August 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hiya, thanks so much for the review.

this story rocks btw, i loved every single bit of it and cant wait to read the next one.

person Raina
schedule August 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
O.O
Wow, that was good. So, so good. I am usually pretty wary of first person POV stories but this, this was executed so fabulously. I loved it!

-Rai
schedule January 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow. just...wow. wow. i loved it. the ending was a surprise to me, and yet absolutely perfect in every way.

lovely dear.
schedule January 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i thought that was great the way it is - maybe if you continued it then it might ruin what you achieved with the ending of this one. Either way I thought it was great and if you choose to write a second part I'll read it ^_^

Thanks for posting,
Hina xXxx
schedule January 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ok, now be good and post that sequel... you almost made me cry like a baby... so, yes... gimme something else to laugh or cry about... It was so sad and cold... that the moment Naruto appeared, I blinked... I sort of hoped... but knowing Naruto was dead... and Sasuke crazy, I had to take a peek to the end... that's why I didnt cry... because I peeked... yes, blame me... but the story pulled me in too... and the lemon was hot..nyan... me liked a lot... so please tell me what happened with them... what did Sasuke understood? are they being reincarnated? Will they live as youkai? what? come on! Please, do tell, ne? *blinks cutely*
person KansouAme
schedule January 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic job! Don't be so hard on yourself. This was a perfect angsty and yet hopeful loving story. Keep up the good work.
person Ai_Kyou_Gokai
schedule January 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh my god. I have to say this is probably the best, most artistic, well written story ever! it gave me chills! it was simply AMAZING! I have a new favorite author! AMAZING WORK! Write a sequal! I Will read it! I loved this story! You ARE god!!!! You hear me? FUCKING GOD!!!

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