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by nayru

person sadistickiss
schedule January 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*coo* Aw it's so cute XD! I have to admit, I'm a little iffy about Pakkun following them around, it makes thing seem a little less personal. But you said the other readers like him so I won't complain too much. I loved Iruka in sensei mode, the pineapple thing was adoraaable *heart heart*.

Can't wait to read more *love*.
person lo
schedule January 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is cute and clever. Nice job.
person Anon
schedule January 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I enjoyed the DOG soooo much, your fic really made me laugh. So I think i've found my Iruka, everything is going well but would be better if i had a nin dog. ^_^
person ALD
schedule January 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This story keeps getting better. I can't wait to see what happens when Kakashi tries to cook w/Pakkun. Hope you update soon. :)
person ALD
schedule January 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
What a great start. I love the interaction between Kakashi and Pakkun, totally cracked me up w/the "sniffing the butt" part, that was classic. I always like the stories where Kakashi is pursuing Iruka, but a lot of them seem too rushed. The pace is great, and I love a story w/good dialogue. Your grammar is really good too, which always adds to the story. Update soon!
person Reily
schedule January 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I loved your Pakkun and just the image of Kakashi standing in the street arguing with a dog made me giggle!
I've read a few of your things and I really like the way you write, I particularly like the way we get to see Kakashi's thoughts on what's happening. I look forward to seeing how the rest of the story progresses.
person kiss_me_deadly
schedule January 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I do like Pakkun. I always imagine Kakashi being close to the nin-dog. After all, he did teach him how to talk. Good start.
person Khaos
schedule January 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like the start so far- Kakashi is so nice when he's a loser. It makes a change from the super sexy ultimate awesome kakashi that pollutes far too many of the kakshi/iruka fiction out there. Keep it up, and update soon ^^
person americanXminority
schedule January 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hahaha! This is incredibly cute.
I love it and certainly can't wait for more ^_^.
Give me a heads-up when you've updated?
Kakairu FTW E>
person Guesto-chan
schedule January 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE this story! A flustered Kakashi is always the best! He always seems so unruffled in the manga, so it's a refreshing change to see him at his wit's end! ^^ KakaIru is one of my alltime fave Naruto pairings, so there's yet another reason to love this story! Woot! And I adore Pakkun! He's so funny when he eggs Kakashi on! Keep up the good work!

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