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by nayru

person Hestia
schedule May 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I remember reading this a while back and really liking it. I can't wait for Chapter 2!! It's really hot and romantic--the best combo!
person Hestia
schedule May 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh, excellent! I love the bite, the mark--great touch! I love the bit about the school teacher voice as well! Wonderful Chapter 2!!
person Tiffany
schedule May 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! Both chapters were soooooooo good! I cant wait for the next part.
person ALD
schedule May 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
What a great comeback. That was a great chapter, can't wait until the next one. I liked that you had Iruka hold out as long as he did, made it seem more realistic.
schedule April 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I gotta say. i didn't like it. I loved and devoured it. I love jelous kakashi, it's my fav kakairu aspect, but i hardly ever see jealous iruka dn this was done briliently. the best jelous lruka i've seen.
person Onawa
schedule March 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well...Wow...That was spectacular for a "practice" run. I'll be looking for more of your stories!
schedule February 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was just incredible! And I am sure as hell that the oh so sweet Iruka-sensei is fully capable of hiding such a side from the world. Except from his Kakashi. But... damn that was hot! Hehe... I like the ide of a Kakashi sceaming to be taken. And dont they say that people who are dominant in their everydaylife are submissive in bed? ;) My lord... (or better not him by the way) That was amazing! Love it, just love it.
person Hestia
schedule February 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I don't know if I reviewed this before, but this is really sexy and romantic. I really liked it a lot! Thanks for posting this!
person ALD
schedule January 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was soooo hot! I can't believe that was your first lemon. One of the best I've read. Hope to see more stories from you.
person Reily
schedule January 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This was absolutley delicious, I can't believe that this is your first lemon! I liked that you drew out the scene through the whole story it made it very steamy. I loved the possessivness of both of them it was all just fabulous and I can't wait to see what else you write!

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