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November 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
your story's text and spacing is glitched for some reason.... thought you should know.
i look forward to the re-write, it should be interesting to see.
i look forward to the re-write, it should be interesting to see.
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December 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i was checking out my folder of AFF fics i follow to see if any of them have been updated in recent months (this year)- i don't see the point in freaking out updates, i'm grateful whenever they come ^_^
this chapter certainly was worth the wait. i re-read the entire fic, becasue i had no idea what was up, but it was great fun. the introduction of the whole kitsune society and a bunch of new characters was a bit much all at once though. i feel as overwhelmed as the kittens must be. plus, omfg - Itachi and Kisame. the kittens and clones are my favorite parts. If they had enough time, Naruto or Kyuubi would figure out the situation with Sasuke, Neji, & Hinata....but things are at their worst. the shit hits the fan before we can even digest whats happening. but i enjoy the sense of urgency.
i look forward to the next chapter. i also do not read authors notes, but for whatever reason, or how long it takes for new chapters, don't stress. as long as hope is not lost, then take your time & kick ass with awesome chapters whenever they come.
this chapter certainly was worth the wait. i re-read the entire fic, becasue i had no idea what was up, but it was great fun. the introduction of the whole kitsune society and a bunch of new characters was a bit much all at once though. i feel as overwhelmed as the kittens must be. plus, omfg - Itachi and Kisame. the kittens and clones are my favorite parts. If they had enough time, Naruto or Kyuubi would figure out the situation with Sasuke, Neji, & Hinata....but things are at their worst. the shit hits the fan before we can even digest whats happening. but i enjoy the sense of urgency.
i look forward to the next chapter. i also do not read authors notes, but for whatever reason, or how long it takes for new chapters, don't stress. as long as hope is not lost, then take your time & kick ass with awesome chapters whenever they come.
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August 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You've updated!!! Oh happy day!! ^^ (does a little happy dance!) Hooray!!
After waiting, like, over a year for updates I was a little distressed when you posted that you were probably going to redo this story from the start. I was all like "oh noes," but am relieved to see you are not. Overall I've always found the beginning chapters of this story to be executed with pure perfection. The level of depth and details at play within the story were beyond touching and I really loved where everything was going... until the woods and all Kyuubi's demonkin showed up and took over the plot. Honestly, has always felt a little left field up until this chapter. You've really managed to tie things together in here. (insert excitement)
Favorite moments: I loved the moment we came back to Naruto clone and the gang and where they meet up with Kisami. That was pretty awesome when Naruto was all like "if you have my kittens then where am I?" lol Thats such a random statement that could only exist within the framework of this story. Also, at the very end when Kyuubi looses control to Naruto just as the ANBU show up? OMFGZ!
Overall, I am ecstatic you are updating again. THere are still so many unanswered questions in this story and I can't wait for them to develop answers! Keep up the fantastic work and know you will always have atleast one person excited on the other end to read them. ^^
After waiting, like, over a year for updates I was a little distressed when you posted that you were probably going to redo this story from the start. I was all like "oh noes," but am relieved to see you are not. Overall I've always found the beginning chapters of this story to be executed with pure perfection. The level of depth and details at play within the story were beyond touching and I really loved where everything was going... until the woods and all Kyuubi's demonkin showed up and took over the plot. Honestly, has always felt a little left field up until this chapter. You've really managed to tie things together in here. (insert excitement)
Favorite moments: I loved the moment we came back to Naruto clone and the gang and where they meet up with Kisami. That was pretty awesome when Naruto was all like "if you have my kittens then where am I?" lol Thats such a random statement that could only exist within the framework of this story. Also, at the very end when Kyuubi looses control to Naruto just as the ANBU show up? OMFGZ!
Overall, I am ecstatic you are updating again. THere are still so many unanswered questions in this story and I can't wait for them to develop answers! Keep up the fantastic work and know you will always have atleast one person excited on the other end to read them. ^^
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March 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love this story sooo much! Please say you 'll continue!! and what does Omai-toh mean?
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February 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really love this story, every time I reread it I just find more to like about it. Has it been abandoned? I really hope not, because finding a story of this caliber is rare and I really want to find out what happens next!
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October 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Loved this story, I hope you update it soon!
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September 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ah, finally finished! I read the whole thing through in one sitting and am quite disappointed that there's nothing else to read when there is SO much more left to be done!
I think it is quite adorable that Sasuke, Neji, and Hinata are all who have fallen under this neko-jutsu. So, shall it be a foursome in the end? Quite interesting! I liked the falcon's presence, it was very good for the plot, especially to the demise of the naughty-nekos! Naruto is surely having a bad week, but there is so much about this "illness" that is not explained really. You brought up Tsunade and Jiraiya, but how come they have not come to help Naruto? Also, by bringing them up, how are they in the picture when you mentioned Sandaime early on being the Hokage.
Mm.. we haven't seen a lot of Sasuke/Neji/Hinata's POV in the last chaps, especially the part where Sasuke realizes that Naruto held the Kitsune. Besides the fact that Hinata and Neji knew and told him, but how did *they* know? And if they did, how come they didn't realize the pain Naruto was in if they were truly as close as was described when they hung out?
Besides some plot-holes that may have been left intentionally (won't know until you UPDATE ^__^) and a few basic errors in words and such (such simple mundane things that we *all* do at times), I really enjoyed this piece and hope that some day you decide to pick it back up!
Just curious if you have a beta b/c you haven't given credit due and if you were in need of one, I'm always willing to give a helping hand to such lovely, entertaining fic-ka's such as yourself ^_^ Do drop a line if you are interested!
I think it is quite adorable that Sasuke, Neji, and Hinata are all who have fallen under this neko-jutsu. So, shall it be a foursome in the end? Quite interesting! I liked the falcon's presence, it was very good for the plot, especially to the demise of the naughty-nekos! Naruto is surely having a bad week, but there is so much about this "illness" that is not explained really. You brought up Tsunade and Jiraiya, but how come they have not come to help Naruto? Also, by bringing them up, how are they in the picture when you mentioned Sandaime early on being the Hokage.
Mm.. we haven't seen a lot of Sasuke/Neji/Hinata's POV in the last chaps, especially the part where Sasuke realizes that Naruto held the Kitsune. Besides the fact that Hinata and Neji knew and told him, but how did *they* know? And if they did, how come they didn't realize the pain Naruto was in if they were truly as close as was described when they hung out?
Besides some plot-holes that may have been left intentionally (won't know until you UPDATE ^__^) and a few basic errors in words and such (such simple mundane things that we *all* do at times), I really enjoyed this piece and hope that some day you decide to pick it back up!
Just curious if you have a beta b/c you haven't given credit due and if you were in need of one, I'm always willing to give a helping hand to such lovely, entertaining fic-ka's such as yourself ^_^ Do drop a line if you are interested!
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May 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
are you still updating this storey?
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March 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
What can I say, Beautiful, captivating, a joy to read.
Even though I'm late reading this story (I noticed you haven't updated in quite a long time I hope you will read this and maybe continue to write this amazing tale. I will keep checking and hoping to see another chapter eventually.
so I'm off to read styx, I know it will be as good as Naked and sanctuary.
keep up the good work.
Love Robyn.
Even though I'm late reading this story (I noticed you haven't updated in quite a long time I hope you will read this and maybe continue to write this amazing tale. I will keep checking and hoping to see another chapter eventually.
so I'm off to read styx, I know it will be as good as Naked and sanctuary.
keep up the good work.
Love Robyn.
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March 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I miss this story. So do my cats. Its their favorite fanfic on Aff.Net. Yes, I do read it to them. And they think its great and very humorous. I was told by them to write a review on how much they miss their favorite story and that if I didn't it wouldn't be good for me. Now that I did as I was told because I am so well trained and all, do you think you might pick up the story sometime in the future? Please? For them?