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May 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You really need to continue this fic mate, if not for the hentai then for the Lulz potential.
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May 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very fresh and original, I thought that slime was hilarious. I wish there was more.
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March 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
AWESOME!!! Very entertaining...^_^ Can't wait to find out what perverted mischief does down next. And thanx for the Omake's, they were pretty funny!
UPDATE!!!!!
UPDATE!!!!!
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February 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great story, but are you done with it so soon? i hope not, because that would be sad. you should really take this story further, it has the potential. Either way, good job.
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January 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hahahahahahahahahaha!!!!!
Now THIS is INTERESTING!!!
Jiraiya is going to have a field trip for this!!!
And what an odd way for Naruto & Hinata to get ..... [can't find the word...]
PLEASE UPDATE!!!!
Now THIS is INTERESTING!!!
Jiraiya is going to have a field trip for this!!!
And what an odd way for Naruto & Hinata to get ..... [can't find the word...]
PLEASE UPDATE!!!!
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January 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this story is cool...I just hope you will continue it
I must say it will be a interesting change when Naruto
learned la blue girl style ninjitsu ^_^;
What would happen when Sesuke sees it and copy it... @_@
Please continue your story...
Oh yeah when are you gonna update your other story? Like the twisted fate?
I must say it will be a interesting change when Naruto
learned la blue girl style ninjitsu ^_^;
What would happen when Sesuke sees it and copy it... @_@
Please continue your story...
Oh yeah when are you gonna update your other story? Like the twisted fate?
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January 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great stroy. I really cant wait for more. Your other story was entertaining and well written. I look forward to more of your work ^.^
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January 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This story is even better here! I loved the Sakura scene, and hope to see more like it!
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January 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This story is even better here! I loved the Sakura scene, and hope to see more like it!
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January 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
lol, good fic, pretty original in ideas and funny as hell. i will look forward to seeing more in the future.