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June 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE IT!!!! I especially love when sakura gets jealous of naruto and ako. I hope you update soon. I can't wait to read what happens next
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June 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like your story :)
I think your doing great developing the story dont rush the well you know ;)... hope to read more soon :)
I think your doing great developing the story dont rush the well you know ;)... hope to read more soon :)
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June 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Dude chaper seven rocked!!! Great job on making all the charicters stay in charicter, great strong ending, and remember a real master peice of fan fiction is not all about smut but the story as well. ps: I'm sorry for asking but is there gonna be a threesome with Ako, Anko and Naruto? mail me naruto@rivalmail.com
funny end note by the way
funny end note by the way
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June 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm really suspicious of this Ako girl. Why is she doing this? Is she just supposed to be a convenient lay? A girl for Naruto to throw in Sakura's and Sasuke's faces? She needs a reason, a motivation, and I look forward to finding out what it is. Naruto needs to get some payback.
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June 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I can't really say much except I honestly hope you continue and I hope it's soon! I can't say much more than that, good job.
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June 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really am enjoying your story. It is about time Naruto got some action. I look foward to your next chapter with Sasuke's point of view. Please update soon.
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June 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!
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June 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was hot! Very nicley done, I look forward to reading more.
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June 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i like. i hope to read your next chappy
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June 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm looking forward to Sasuke and Sakuras reactions! Me