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Wow, how sad. That actually made me sad. Very interesting this peice. I wonder where this is going.

To put this simply,

If. You. Don't. Update. In. Two. Seconds. I'm Going. To. Go. Crazy.

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~*Kira*~

Wah!!! This is so much angst; it makes me appreciate the fact that the chapters are short...

Soo... You're gonna write more for this, ne? I need some resolution for little Naru. I hate that Sasuke should make him feel worthless. If anything, that stupid bastardy Uchiha should feel like the lowest of the low. Damn that bastard!

Heh, sorry about the mini-rant. I'm just going to distract myself by praising your wonderful writing. I think this fic especially showcases your talent since the emotion in the story is so well conveyed; I don't think anyone could do that as effectively as you have. Plus, I really detest angst, but I do tend to brave it for well written stories. And great fics like yours (which are utterly few and far inbetween) actually make me love and crave the angst! Thus, I'm hoping you write more^.^

Yay! I can actually review on the site now! ^_^ (Couldn't before bc ff.net and IE hate each other. . .)

It may have been short, but I still liked it. Stupid Sasuke. Who goes to someone's house, presumably to talk, stays so long the other person goes to bed, and then leaves? Poor Naruto. Btw, I'm really liking your characterizations of these two. They're mostly in character, but they also have a bit of your own style in them. Always good!

God....Nooooooooooooooo.......You can't do this to me......Please.....O god please.....You have to update soon.......Pleas, please, please, please, PLEASE!!!!!!!!...;_;......please.....(crying).......God did......did you really......please say it isn't true...sasuke......Please!.....;_;....naruto......O god naruto.....your not.....god naruto your beautiful and Perfect in every way!.......If anyone is lower then a piece of shit it's.......IT'S SAKURS THAT'S WHO!!!!!!!!!!!!......GOD (Pooling her hear out).....I HATE THE BITCH.....AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA........;_;....why can't she just stay out of naruto and sasuke's life........Please....Please I beg of you...just leave them the HELL ALONE!!!!.....I.....I just have a few questions.....Why is sasuke there?.....Why isn't he talking to naruto?........But more I'm importantly.......WHY DID HE LEAVE THE NEXT DAY WHEN NARUTO WHOKE UP.......(Crying).......WHY!!!!!!!....;_;......Does he have any idea how much that hurt's?!!!!!......To see the one you love, long for, cry for each night,...the one you trusted with you life......To see them again.....then have then disappear the next day from your life, without a sine...without a trace of them ever being there that day....Does he know how much it hurt's?....;_;...How much you think your going insane.....waking up to nothing?........DOES HE?!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!.....Naruto.......
.....Please update soon......I want......I want to know if naruto....If he will be ok......I want to know if sasuke will save him....(looks up to the heaven’s......and whispers to the wind and stars).....Please save him....;_;.....Please.....
Kisses ^_~

No, it's too short! Need more! Well, just need more Naruto bashing Sasuke. I get the feeling Naruto's acting overdramatic, like a girl... so I can't blame Sasuke too much since Naruto's a gender confused head case.

You're going to continue this right? RIGHT!!? I mean you can't leave it right there! and the last line in that chapter was killer, I don't know why, but I got all teary!!

and Sasuke that bastard oohhhh he's soooo going to regret everything isn't he! HAH! I hope Naruto sleeps with someone else and Sasuke walks in and everything Muahahahah that would be great. But anyhow, how ever you write it I know it will be interesting, so you better continue this, ALRIGHT!!

Not bad, its an interesting intro, but too short. Good job so far!

...........;_;........Why......O God why........How Could you.....How could you do that to him sasuke.....How!!!!!!.....;_;....O god naruto....I...I'm so sorry.......;_;....Sasuke you,....you,.....you ASSHOLE.....I.....I HATE YOU!!!!!!.....I...(whispers)....I hate you....;_;....(can't stop crying).....O wait...(stunned)...O god please say it isn't so.....This goes far beyond just cheating....doesn't it....;_;....OMG.....Poor nauto......Sasuke....you,......you,........you got that bitch pregnant didn't you.......(gasp)......Not just any bitch.......(shocked)......You got sakura pregnant.....(crying a river)....OMG sasuke.......She.....she's your teammate....she's......yours and naruto's friend.....I.....I don't believe you.....That's fucked up.....Even for you.......;_;.......And to top it all off....you don't even have the nerve to go after him....God....please sasuke.....please.....Go after naruto.......Tell him you love him.....Tell him your sorry.......Tell him that you'll help take care of the baby.....but that's all....That you wont be with her.....Tell him it was a mistake and that it wont happen again.....Tell him you'll do anything for him to prove you love him.....And that all you want is him.....;_;....Please just do something.....Please....
Two ours latter.......
Sniff,......sniff,.......sniff, sniff,......Sniff........(dries eyes).....I'm sorry.......I'm ok now......really I am.....sigh......I really loved your story......It made me cry.....and it broke my heart.......But that's why I loved it......(smile).....Because it was real,....And It made me fell. ^_^ I can't wait for your next chapter.....^^...please may it be very soon....Lol......latter.
Kisses ^_~

Continue? Please? I'll give you virtual cookies!

Okay, I really like this story. It made me feel! And I hate angst so it's weird I like this as much as I do. Plus, you write so well that it would be a shame not to continue this. Your plot bunny is still a baby. You have to make it grow into a huge raging beast of a rabbit! Maybe it'll turn out nice and cute instead of angsty...

Well, I hope you write more for this. In the mean time, I'll go see if you have any other fics. I hope you do, 'cause then I'll get to read more of your wonderful writing^.^