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for You Were Never Mine

by Reyn

person Wonderland
schedule January 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well I've always been a fan of the Naruto and Sasuke pairing, I have wondered how he would rebuild his clan if they were to get together. Maybe if they were to find an understanding woman. I would have thought that Sasuke would take more of an interest in the kid, if for no other reason than as an addition to his clan. Great story. Update soon please.
person FairyCelt
schedule January 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really love this fic...it's very angsty but offers some hope of a happy ending. I hope you plan on continuing this.
person oraday
schedule January 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wah, so few words, so much conveyed. I didn't realize it was Ino that Sasuke had impregnated... Or at least, I'm thinking it's Ino. I had assumed it was Sakura... But it doesn't matter who it was, it just matters that Sasuke had to be a big enough bastard to do that.

Beautifully written and I don't mind the shortness. Every word seems so weighted with meaning that it's just so befitting to write in small installments like this. I don't really think I could take more of the intense emotions you convey through Naruto's POV. Ah! This is just so great, regardless of the fact I don't really like angst. But, hey, I can definitely appreciate angst that makes a story as great as this^.^
person Devils-Advocate3
schedule January 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG. Lol I love this story.....Hell I love you. ^_^. God what is sasuke hiding......What isn't he telling us.....(blush)....Um...(Bush even more)....I mean nauto. Ha, ha. What isn't he telling naurto???....God sasuke. I hate you for cheating on naruto...But did you really do that...I mean I know your hiding something....If there is a slight chance that you didn't really cheat on him...And you possibly still have a chance with him again. I don't see what's holding you back. Who cares about pride when you can have naruto back?! If you do?!....Then you don't deserve him. If you pride mean's more to you...Then you obviously don't love him...Sigh...(frustrated) On the plus side though..(smile)..I'm glad that he doesn't plan to marry that bitch....(Grin)..God I hate her...sigh...God sasuke....why,....WHY?!!!! Wants to cry....Why?

IEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE I can't believe you finally updated. Lol I'm so happy. ^_^. I just wish your chapter's were a bit longer...sigh...O well. IEEEEEEEEEEEE Lol When's your next update....^_^....God I hope it's soon. I'm addicted to your story. ;_;. God why is it so good....Why?!! Lol Well hope to see you and your update soon. Latter.
kisses ^_~
person Gina
schedule January 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
The story is REALLY good!\^o^/
Love it already - you kan really sense that they in for a hard one!XD
But... the chapters are to a bit short.^^;;
I really like the way you discribe the characters, but you don't really get a feeling of the situation when the just end that fast.
But DON'T take this in a bad way! I love the story! d^___^b

And this is only my opinon, your doing a great job on this story so PLEASE continue!^^
person roely
schedule January 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i love ur story!
schedule January 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm intrigued... update when you can, I'd like to see where this is going.

Hina xXxx
person Stagoya
schedule January 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This story completely intrigues me. I'll definitely keep checking back for more updates.
person animehead
schedule December 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoy this story so far, I love the way it is written with the angst and all. I used to stray away form agnst, but since I started writing fanfictions, I don't mind it so much. Hell, I use it in my stories! Anyway, I can't wait to see what is waiting to unfold between these two. I'll be awaiting your next update.

~animehead
person Anon
schedule December 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wahhh waaaayyyyyy to SHORT!!!!

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