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February 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ummm this is really good, but the chapters are too short. basically nothing has happened in 4 chapters except establishing that naruto thinks/knows sasuke cheated on him? but i really like the way it's written, very eloquent and emotional. so write lots more! =D its very intriguing so far and frustratingly short ;__;
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January 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i like ur story it is very mysterious! I want to know why Sasuke is doing all that to poor Naruto!
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January 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
In some ways I can Naruto being upset over the baby, but in other ways I can never see Naruto ever treating another person like he was. Hating a person for something that wasn't his fault. I'd like to see Sasuke get it for something. Update soon please.
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January 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I Can't help it. I love your story so much...Even though I just finished crying. Lol. But I guess not every story has a happy ending. Huh....I wonder why prid get's in the way of true happyness....Sigh...O well. Anyway, If you keep writing? I'll keep reading. ^_^ And I'll try to keep reviewing. Ok. So If you can, Please update soon. I can't wait. Lol See yea latter.
Kisses ^_~
Kisses ^_~
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January 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Dammit Sasuke!!!! Argh, I didn't think I could have that bastard more, but his bastardiness reached a new level here so I can't help but detest him all the more.
Wah, I'm crushing my poor Naruto plushy. I feel so bad that he's suffering through such self-hate. I just want him to realize that Sasuke's the one who's fucked up... I guess Naru-chan can't see that though... He just loves Sasuke too much. Oh, the lovely angst.
Yeah, I'm still liking the angst here, though I feel terribly sad for Naruto... Anyways, thanks for the update. I thoroughly enjoyed it, the progress means the ending is near and there WILL be happiness... Or else Sasuke will have to be tarred and feathered^.^
Wah, I'm crushing my poor Naruto plushy. I feel so bad that he's suffering through such self-hate. I just want him to realize that Sasuke's the one who's fucked up... I guess Naru-chan can't see that though... He just loves Sasuke too much. Oh, the lovely angst.
Yeah, I'm still liking the angst here, though I feel terribly sad for Naruto... Anyways, thanks for the update. I thoroughly enjoyed it, the progress means the ending is near and there WILL be happiness... Or else Sasuke will have to be tarred and feathered^.^
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January 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It takes talent to pack such a punch with short chapters (that's not meant to be a complaint about the size of the chapters). Look forward to reading more.
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January 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was really sad - I feel like stabbing sasuke, I honestly do. But what's done is done. Glad you updated and hope the nect one comes soon?
Hina xXxx
Hina xXxx
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January 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!!!!!!! that was such a good chapter!!!!! the last sentence on chp. 4 was tearjerker. its just so sad(crys)stupid sasuke-teme(imagines beating the hell out of sasuke) i just want to hug naruto and tell him everything's gonna be o.k. sauke-teme will come to his senses.anyway good story!!!!! update faster!!!!!!!!!pretty pleeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaassssssssssseeeeeeee!!!!!! with a cherry on top!!
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January 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
T_________________________T this fic is so amazing, it makes me cry T_____________T Naruto is so deep i like it, poor Naru-chan where are you Sasuke-kun :(
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January 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Woah... Make Sasuke suffer...thats all im saying - that lying mother fucker.
Naruto could be happy with somebody else and make Sasuke see what he lost.
Tha would be fair enough... It soo sad... I really feel so sorry for Naruto...
Don't make him suffer so band...*sniff* T___T
Naruto could be happy with somebody else and make Sasuke see what he lost.
Tha would be fair enough... It soo sad... I really feel so sorry for Naruto...
Don't make him suffer so band...*sniff* T___T