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Well, alright. D/s Naruto was a bit much for my poor simple mind to take. The PWP you write is always carnally arousing, and even though you write your characters deliberately OOC, (which I detest in most cases) I find myself enjoying your writing on a primal level. Ibiki has always been one of my favorite characters in Naruto. I wonder how much pain he did go through that our minds can't comprehend.

I like the way you characterized Sai. He knows how to detach himself from his emotions, but like Data and his emotion-chip, so to speak, when his emotions are raging, he has no idea how to control them when they are released out of his poor, depraved, sociopath mind.

I love it so far. I think I'm gonna stick with this one.

<3 You.

BG

Just want to comment and say that I'm re-reading this awesome fic for the 3rd time. I LOVE YOU! This pairing is so hot and drool-worthy. I really hope you will continue on with this smexy fic. Thank you again!

Waaa I liked this too! Now I keep thinking of Ibiki and Sai in terms of D/s but really that doesn't fit well there. I like this Sai a lot :) Gah for someone who has never watched the show you're making me a fan of Sai!!! <3 I keep looking up all the characters and reading their character background/info pages and it amazes me how well you incorporate their histories into this and your more AU works :) I hope you get inspired to continue this but somehow I think you jumped from this tame stuff to doing D/s lol...

OMG.....What an AWESOME and original pairing for a fic! You totally converted me. O_O SO FRIGGIN' HAwt!! i hope you will continue with this wonderful story. Can't wait to see what happens next. Need I say it again? You are so worshipped and loved! I declare you to be my #1 most favorite Naruto fic writer of all time!! <333

If you do not update this soon I may have to hunt you down and express my extreme displeasure as your neglegence.

I could go into a discription of how this tale affected me, but that would just be tacky. Instead I will have a smoke, a cup a coffee and move on to your next entrepid tale.

Thank you!!!!

O.O *blink blink*

XD ROFLMAO XD

Alrighty then... hehehehe

Wow XD. That was one superb mind fuck, and then the lessons, Oh my, the fun has begun. You do the master/slave, relationship really well. Better than anyone else I've read on this site. Your writing is very Ann Rice like, I may have told you that before, but the quality of it is very similar. Needless to say I think you rock socks, which you already know. I can't wait to see where this one goes, it'll be a little different with yaoi, LOL, I'm excited about this XD.

OMG Lady, once again, all those lovely, messy, dirty little things that no one really wants to admit to, or say out loud, you've written them down: In black and dove grey. Oh and how I love you for it ;D. That was amazing, even with the crying jags, which as bad as I am, I found pretty funny, I must say. The fact that the last thing Ibiki loved was his doggie that died when he was thirteen was just sad though. I also liked that Sai is now completely at a loss, he'll manage I have faith in him and in the level of commitment you put into your stories. That very hard core monogamous aspect is one of the things I like the most about your writing, especially since it's so very rare these days.

yo,


thanks to you, i`m in love with this couple. i think those two can get really dirty, kinky and fuck each other mind. anyway hope you update soon. wishlist: maybe ibiki should repay the same favours and interogate sai, after all if sai has to learn by experience; from the expert himself no?
i think my mind went to the gutter, gosh im twisted today. you made my day :)
read you later

=D That was Hott. It always amazes me how disfunctional yet workable your characters are. The signed conversations at the beginning were funny and a sweet way to show Sai's possessiveness. The beginners blowjob was also really interesting, clumsy and a little violent but still hot. You will never cease to amaze me.