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for A Lover for the Holidays

by VanyelKalin

person Onawa
schedule July 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I hope you are still writing. IruXKa is my favorite pairing. Have you gotten any Beta offers?

This is a sweet story, and I could just visualize the scene where the kids walked in - funny!
person Amarugome
schedule December 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!!!! I love it....i can't stop reading...
its so amazing and i donn't read mayn good stories in Iruka....
wow you're truly great with this one...LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!
person Amarugome
schedule December 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh how i love this chapter!
person ALD
schedule December 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great story so far! I really like it. The scenes between Kakashi and Iruka are cute, I can't wait for the really steamy stuff! Keep the chapters comin'!
person Hestia
schedule December 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hi! Thanks for the link! A cute update! But how come no details of what happened after the oral sex? (Hey, it's ok--sorry to be such a perv when you are trying for art here) Thanks for the update!
person Mally
schedule December 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like this story! It's quite fun to read even if a little short on chapter length. It works fine though, and keeps things from getting slow. I really love how you've explained why there's Christmas there, most stories just make it happen. ^^ Very wonderful job!
person Reily
schedule December 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Smut and an aggresive Iruka what a fabulous combination and I could only imagine the look on the kids faces. Of course I loved Sasuke's line I'm sure they're all kicking themselves for not noticing that.
I left a review for you earlier on ff.net under the name Mytha, I don't use that name any more but sometimes out of habit I type it,
so sorry for the confusion. Anywho that's not really important except that it seems to prove that I'm a little flaky and I'm stalking you, but it's only because I'm enjoying your stories so much I can't wait for more!
Also I decided to leave the review here because being the nosey bugger I am I read your profile and I was wondering if you were going to post any of your original stuff? I don't always read original work but it would be interesting to see what it's like compared to your fanfiction.
Anyway I'll happily await the next chapter!
person Hestia
schedule December 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is a fabulous Christmas present! Wow and extras at your website--I hope it's clearly listed on your profile (the address) because I'm a complete incompetent at navigating live journal, which is why I usually haunt this site instead. Anyway--loved Sasuke's line! What the hell is the multisyllabic word that is the symbol for Kakashi on the window? I guess if I get motivated I could look it up. Ok so back to praise--loved Iruka hanging up the mistletoe. I love Iruka as seme, and the whole explanation of why Kakashi is cool with it is great. I like the idea of Iruka as a tiger with his scars--great image. The cookies was a cute start as well. Bring on the smut!! Great job!

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