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for In the shadows

by shadeoftroll

person Hello
schedule December 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Nice story. Update soon. :D
person Hestia
schedule December 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love both of your stories--wow--you are together!!! I can't believe I let this get to 4 chapters before reading it! I'm going to have to stop and review after each one because I LOVE IBIKI!!! I LOVE IRUKA!!!! And this is the first Ibiki/Iruka!!! Oh my!!!

It was magnificient!! Fantastic!!! Asuma, Kakashi, Genma!!! The essays!!! The line about spread Iruka's ass--oh god, I'm probably going to have steal that word for one of my stories--it's too, too good! Aw, my poor adorable Ibiki with a hurt knee and his cold lonely apartment--oh, bless you two!!

Hey, did I make it clear enough I love this?
person Hestia
schedule December 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh sorrow--only two chapters--I got confused with another story I want to read. But what a good chapter! And KOTETSU AND IZUMO my favorite chuunin hotties after Iruka! Oh my and Kakashi, Jiraiya, Kotetsu (and Naruto???!!! oh my!!) all hot for Iruka--will my poor baby Ibiki be able to win his heart when he can't flirt and is trapped being the big bad scary scarred guy??

Oh god, this is brilliant! It's brilliant! I hope someday I can write something as good!
Love you both,
Hestia
person Khaos
schedule December 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really am loving this fic. The "Iruka is a big virgin" sign made me laugh so hard. Its great to see odd pairings, and I'd love to see where this Ibiki thing is going. Keep it up.
person ZeldaFitz
schedule December 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That made me laugh. I can already tell I'm going to love this fic. I've never seen an Ibiki and Iruka pairing, but it works. Thank you for not making Iruka a wuss. He is a ninja, after all. Ibiki wa so clueless. You'd think he'd at least have heard about Iruka's temper, being in T&I and all. Poor Ibiki. He has no idea what he's geting himself into. Can't wait for more.
person w00t
schedule December 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
omg...ibiki smexing...why does that turn me on so much?
person TheRedeemer
schedule December 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yes! You've got something really special here. Not only does the story part ways with the normal dulldrum of the standard pairings, it has kept everyone in-character so well! Congrats! I can't wait to find out how things develop.
person eve4mem
schedule December 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is great and very unexpected. I can't wait to see how this is going to work.
person ABC
schedule December 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
lol! i love irukas temper! always have! the tohers have a right to be nervouise! lol!
person wouldnt-u-like-2-no
schedule December 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
omg! wooh....i was soooo worried that naruto and irkua were going to do things not apropraite for a blonde that age. but it ended up being really cute!

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