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for In the shadows

by shadeoftroll

person Anon
schedule December 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
must say i wasn't sure what to expect from this, but i have to admit i am pleasantly surprised. you guys managed to keep iruka cute, but still manly. i also really liked the humor throughout the story. this is the first time i've ever read an ibiki/iruka fic, and it's nice. there should be more iruka loving... and more for ibiki! i imagine it's hard to pair him with someone, but i think you guys took to the challange well. thanks for sharing and hope you guys have more soon! :D
person Hasu
schedule December 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh Kami-sama! I love this!
Poor Iruka sounds like he's starting to go insane, which is so adorable. And beating up Kakashi, that was just great.
See who said Chuunin were weak?
This whole this is just so.........KAWAII!!
More, more, more! Onegai!
person ShivaIce
schedule December 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
._. 'we'? oh well.... I love the story so please keep writing. ^-^ THANKIES!
person Aka
schedule December 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Even though Ibiki/Iruka is a crack pairing, you make it so....not crack (if that makes sense ^^).
And even if you didn't, I love crack pairing ^____^
Please update soon!!!
person TonTon
schedule December 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Please say there's a lemon in the next one, that would be so great. And congratulations, I think this is the only story I have ever reviewed twice (cant be bothered) so please update soon. I wanna know how it goes
person Hello
schedule December 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yay, update. I like this very much. Iruka's inner voice is so dirty. :p
person Hestia
schedule December 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Not going to do it on the first date??? Oh no, I'm going to die of frustration--oh, no, I guess I could go read some other lemons and just wait for you two to let things reach the perfect point. God, I was so excited when I saw a new chapter up--yea!! Ibiki in civies!!! Yummy!!! Inner Iruka is awesome--that line about mammels and the Discovery Channel--I giggled aloud and made the cat blink (he's a cat--it takes a lot to get him excited). More soon, please! Let see what can I say to encourage you? The Naruto house fixing scene--comic genius! Ibiki reading Iruka's files and Iruka able to sense him--great stuff--we all want Iruka to be secretly a dynamo! And Iruka letting Kakashi die--fabulously funny. Ibiki jealous--oh I love a jealous torture expert--yummy! And Iruka shaking his ass at Shizune--more giggles. This just reordered my list of top five WIPs on this site that I'm addicted to--hmmm, it's in the top three now, having knocked off my personal list two of the tales I've been following for months. So please, you two, keep it up--you really have a great comic style and a flare for romance!
person ZeldaFitz
schedule December 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
A nervous Ibiki is a cute Ibiki, and jealous, too? Inner Iruka will be a lot to handle, I'm sure. This is very sweet and funny. Can't wait for more. For crying out loud, I'm checking for updates everyday. Sheesh!
person Anon
schedule December 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
LOVE IT!!!!ROFLMFAO!!! You bring the characters to life in a way that is so realistic yet hilarious! Update!Update!Update!
person katsuyo
schedule December 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is a great story... can't wait to read what happens next.

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