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I love this story! Strange pairing, but I liked it!

:)

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Wow! This was a great story! Funny, sad, and HOT!!! I laughed so many times, were people looking over at me in the coffee shop! Between my gasps, laughs and squirming in my seat trying to find a comfortable way to sit while my panties were getting soaked... I'm pretty sure people thought I'd lost my mind! MORE!!!

I loved it!

*is still rolling around on the floor so excuse my bad spelling* Your way of describing their personalities is just delectable. Thats right. Its delicious. I mean... I though I had a sense of humor but shame to say... I dont think my own fics comes anywhere near this when it comes to gags. *poke poke poke, twitch twitch twitch* I could really see it before me! TIMBER!! *starts shaking* Well, there's not enough to say about this chappie. I nearly ignored this story but now I'm happy that I didnt. Good job! I'm off to read chapter 2.

Okay... review on chappie 2. Usually I dont review until the end but as it is... I cant help myself. This is just too good! There's not much I cant say that you havent heard before but if its 'Oh Gods I love it, please update soon!' that you want then I guess I dont mind giving you a 'Oh Gods I love it, please update soon!' ;) Good job!

Okay, I skipped reviewing a few chappies *huddles up in a corner growing mushrooms* I'm sorry. Now on with the review.

Uhg, uhg.
Do I have to say more!? That is the comment that nearly woke the other occupants of this house up. I cracked like a nut and laughed so hard I cried... which lured my brother. And of course he wondered what the hell was so funny at 02.36 in the morning. No point hiding it... I let him read. I think he's scarred for life. As the loving sister I am, I'll call him a shrink tomorrow. And then came the pie in the face...
'Eat his fart'
*sits shaking and ignores the glares from my brother sitting in a corner rocking back and forth*
Priceless... too bad I couldnt see my own face. Mustve been something around the lines of >.<
Well... thats the review for this chappie... Until next time...
*walks off scratching her head and butt looking for caveman-Shino*

Just wanted to let you know how much I enjoyed this fic. IMMENSELY! Thsi pairing is extremely hot! <3333 I hope you will continue writing using this cute pairing. Who knew they would actually work out. ;) Keep up the great work! And thanks so much for sharing!

sheer genius crackfic!

This was wonderful. Very, very funny, yet sweet!

Good going.