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for Don't Desert Me

by Ems

person baddaytoday
schedule December 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
So far, so good!! I think this story has a good start, and I would like to see more of it. I encouraged you to write the next chapter!! Heck, Lee hasn't even made his appearance yet. Gaara is not OOC, as far as I can see. Just don't make him a pansy, ne??

GaaLee rocks!! >_<
person Anon
schedule December 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love this already. Not many fics have Gaara calling Lee ugly, and not too many of them are this IC. I am very, very impressed and intrigued.
person L_H
schedule December 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG!! Please, please write more. I love how possesive Gaara is in this story.
person dragoncisco
schedule December 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I have not read this pairing before so I am not sure if I like the pairing or not, but the first chapter has my attention and if you write more I will read it.
person Shinigami24
schedule December 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well I think Lee would look better if he stopped copying Gai and let his hair grow out...And someone got him out of the spandex and in decent clothing. I saw pictures of Lee pre Gai, and he looked cute! *muses* A pity someone cannot send Gaara back in time, so he would get to meet a younger Lee, before he became a genin! I think deep down Lee is just as bad as Hinata at self-confidence. He just is too good at hiding it! If only he would drop the mask he put up...
person Shinigami24
schedule December 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
By the way PLEASE make Gaara the seme, and Lee the uke! And I have a yen to see Lee pregnant! it would be rather fitting...*evil grin* I would gladly pay to see Gai's reaction to that!
person lili
schedule December 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey, it's very interesting! I especially like how you characterize Gaara and Tsunade so far. I hope the next update is soon ^_^
person Stacy
schedule December 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Love it!! Love it!! I love Gaara and Lee!MORE PLEASE
person Passing Reader
schedule December 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I loved it, you did damn good ;p Kept everyone in character and I dont see any spelling mistakes, totally awsome, can wait to see what happends next!
person Anon
schedule December 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm loughing so hard right now! I love Tsunade and her reactions! pleas update this soon!

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