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October 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very Sexy.
...And All While Naruto *That Idiot* Was Asleep. *Sigh* Why Am I Not Surprised??
Poor Hinata!
Let's See What Happens! =)
...And All While Naruto *That Idiot* Was Asleep. *Sigh* Why Am I Not Surprised??
Poor Hinata!
Let's See What Happens! =)
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May 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
When's chapter 2 coming out??!?!
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December 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
nice can't wait for next one
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December 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
can't wait for the next chapter
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December 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
~.^ not bad! tsk tsk tsk hinata! You're so NAUGHTY!!! (cant say i wouldn't have done the same thing xD)
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December 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I was just wondering is this story going to have Naruto find out Hinata likes him
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December 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
An interesting beginning. Keep up the good work.
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December 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This has been approved by anonymous.
Even so your writing could improve, there were some grammatical mistakes as well some style issues. Other than that it was decent piece of a writing and definately a juicy piece of smut.
Don't be afriad to overclock detail.
Even so your writing could improve, there were some grammatical mistakes as well some style issues. Other than that it was decent piece of a writing and definately a juicy piece of smut.
Don't be afriad to overclock detail.
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November 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
plz! continue its getting 2 good but i hope u hav naruto be a smarter dude cuz only a moron can sleep through dat
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November 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
that was a good story but i wonder how old they are suppost to be, pre or post time skip. cant wait for the next chapter.