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June 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
As always your conflicts and plot twists own with unexpectedness of
character behaviour from your newest OC for a nice touch. I await the next chapter.
character behaviour from your newest OC for a nice touch. I await the next chapter.
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June 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
He's so nice! Poor Naruto! poor Hinata! Wait, she's getting a less hyper and immature version of Naruto....hmmmmm....
GO HINATA!!!!!!!
GO HINATA!!!!!!!
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June 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*glomps the Ino-chan* Love this story to pieces!! I hate how Katai is so darn likable though! I was looking forward to hating him...shucks -_-
But the marriage will keep Earth and Fire on good terms! How are they gonna fix it...must update soon! Please!!
But the marriage will keep Earth and Fire on good terms! How are they gonna fix it...must update soon! Please!!
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June 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic read... Looking forward to the next chapter!
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June 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
So good! all the complications and changes, so well done!!! You rock this fic out of this world
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May 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Evil twist, but the planning youmust have put into this! You've been wanting this from the very begining!!!!! Evil! How could you do that to Hinata and Naruto? Duh, cause you're evil. Loved it so you must write more. You must!!!
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May 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Really good story. I still have no idea how Kiba and Akamaru didn't wake up when they were all having sex.
I'm really looking forward to more. Especially after the stunt pulled with Kyuubi.
I'm really looking forward to more. Especially after the stunt pulled with Kyuubi.
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May 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WOOOOT! I have been waiting for udates for a few of my favorite stories. Great job, great update, and keep up the good work!
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May 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Drama always adds to the suspense of what is to come IMO, Good job on this chapter.
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May 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Naurto and Hinata just can't catch a break can they?
Please udpate soon!
Please udpate soon!