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by UmbreonMessiah

person zeroharm
schedule September 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I will have you know that I actually dropped my damn glass of water out of my hand when I saw this on the update page... There is a god :-) please don't keep us waiting so long on the next one!
schedule August 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That chapter was rather touching, full of perfect emotions and expressions, I await the next one.
schedule August 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OK, I will admit it, your writing style is wonderful and captivating. That in itself is a problem, you really need to update soon. please.., I must know what happens next.


LOL, as a funny side note to any other rabid naruto fans, this story as well as two others on fanfiction have done something amazing. I am actually looking forward to the next xhapter of these stories more then I am looking forward to the next episode of naruto. How sad is that..... (To anyone who wants to know the other two stories that have me so captivated just email me and I will tell.) Anyway..... till the next chapter-
-Namer
schedule August 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Amazing job. I was so happy when you decided to continue this story, and i see that it was for good reason. My only complaint is you need to update faster. Seriously, after chapter 10 I was depressed for over a week solid. And that did not go away until this last chapter. In thje end all it does is attest to your ability as an author when your story can actually affect the day to day life of your fans. Good job and please update soon !
schedule August 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Say what???

Double Crossed!
schedule July 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Love this chapter, I naturally saw everything coming but only because I know you all too well, everyone else reading this must be shocked to no ends,I look forward to more of your work.
schedule July 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Excellent chapter. I absolutely loved it.

So tragic. :( (Yet oh so good.) ^^

person Clawn
schedule July 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
What you've written so far is quite magnificent. Please, by all means possible, keep up the good work. ^_^
schedule July 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I was wondering when the great demon fox would act upon everyone, good chapter and good fight scenes.
schedule July 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
holy crap!! ohmigod!!! the craziness! Naruto attacked them all!! That is, like, the worst possible way of all for him to have his friends discover what he is. OH MY GOD!!! Drama!

Seriously. YOu have to update this again soon. I mean, yeah, the humble reader shouldn't be making demands on your process to creative perfection, but damn. I need to know what happens next! I need to! Seriously. Hurry the fuck up! ((And excellent chapter, btw. ^^ You don't actually have to hurry up, but you know, if you want to, who am I to stop you. Heh.))

Keep up the good work!

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