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by oraday

person blisblop
schedule November 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I would have thought both but since you said one then its Neji's, it sounds like he is being topped from the bottom.
person Arilyn
schedule November 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Neji's they were Neji's thoughts. And that fic was adorable.
person sapphirexkat2
schedule November 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Mmm, very sexy. I think the last thoughts are Gaara's, since you implied that it could be either Neji's or Gaara's... nicely done!
person Cindy
schedule November 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Neji's thoughts
person kawaiicrimsonkitsune
schedule November 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
..... Nice story and its kinda obvious its Nejis thoughts.... cause Gaara is tellin him what to do.
person seraphym
schedule November 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like the neiji/gaara pairing, and I definitely think those are neiji's thoughts. Even though Gaara is the uke he is definitely the one in control, just the way neiji likes it... Are you goign to keep this a one-shot? It's definitely strong enough one it's own, but I love the story and the style you have going, so I would like to see it developed too.

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