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for A Virgin Kiss

by Hestia

person Cindy
schedule December 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Just gets better and better~!
person Allys
schedule December 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow things got hella complicated for a second there, I love how Naruto and Sasuke are spicing things up from afar.
person Allys
schedule December 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hehehe, Nice ;D IF I cross my fingers and wish real hard do you think when I flick back to latest you'll have updated again? That was the coolest thing ever by the way.
schedule December 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great Idea!! You need to make friends to make for a good long relationship...nyan! Neji... impressive... you can sense stuff even when you are almost cumming... kudos for you!!! nyan!! Me loves you!1
person redtatsu
schedule December 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*sigh* redtatsu is vey happy right now. Her mind is on Neji/Gaara overload. *sigh* Very happy indeed.
schedule December 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oh yeah!! vulnerable neji and practicins gaara... great!! i want more!!! Hestia-sama!! Onegai!! Me good kitten!!*sits straight with paws on her lap, waiting.* Teach me onegai shimasu!!!
schedule December 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
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So cute!!! God!!! So good... this feels like watching a porn... only better... it actually has a plot!! I love it!!! nyan!! Keep up the good work and thank you for the 3 updates!!!
person Luthien Wildglen
schedule December 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow, you've written so much and I haven't gotten a chance to review in a while, but I just wanted to say that this fic is extremely sexy, and yet very romantic. I positively love the fact that you didn't go the typical route of "let’s have a ton of angst and drama and then one lemon." I think its more realistic, particularly in regards to Ninja, to have one-night-stands that develop into relationships, and of course with lots of lemons a long the way. Actually, to tell you the truth I really wasn't a fan of Neji/Gaara fics until I read yours. Now they're one of my new favorite pairings. I like this fic so much that I think I will go and check out what else you have written. Anyway though, keep up the amazing work and I look forward to the next chapter. My best wishes for you and your writing.


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person eien no ren
schedule December 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I thought this couldnt get better... damn it! I thought wrong... it was so sweet of Neji to tell Gaara about that... So hot... and insightful. It feels good to read this... nyan.. once again I was there watching them get it on... and I was aroused and happy... keep it up, sensei!
person Hikari M 666
schedule December 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Niiice. With the Naruto fandom, I've always been a total SasuNaru follower, but I've been completely open about almost any pairings. But until now, I'd actually never read a fanfic that was totally centred around a different couple. I loved it - the pairing, definitely, but mostly your writing style. I really like the way that - how can I put it - Neji and Gaara are both really...straightforward? about what they want. Everything they say in the first chapter or so was really calculating and detached from emotion, in the most in-character way I've ever seen. Well, I hope that makes sense, anyway XD Simply put, I love your characterisation. Nice work.

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