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for Jiraiya's Hot Spring

by silverman94392

person ::insert middle finger::
schedule November 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
you liar, there wasn't any anal, geez. don't advertise what you don't got. "...he copuldn't help it, naruto was his little man." -__-;;; best/worst line ever <3
person Anon
schedule November 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WOH
person Maverick
schedule November 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Do you think this is quality enough work to be published next to some of your favorite AFF stories? That's a question I would seriously like people to ask themselves when posting their stuff. I'm not being a wise-ass, I promise.

I'd say more, but that'd make this review longer and more thought-out than the story itself...

- M
person Just_me
schedule November 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Your disclaimer doesn't seem to work and your story... well, it's short and I've got the feeling it's not all of it. Fix it, please.

ja ne ^^V
person billy
schedule November 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You are going to keep going right.please
person terranigma11
schedule November 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Um...Are you actually being serious with this?

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